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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This will happen every Christmas. Not just the one you wrote it on. After all, Christmas comes EVERY year.
And so, at this rate, will Cloud...
And so, at this rate, will Cloud...
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...that was so beautiful! Thanks for writing such an awesome Cloud x Aeris fic. I absolutely love this pairing!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEAVENS AND BEYOOOOND. xD
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a very, very great story. It left me crying to tears for a few times. If you can, please write another one. I'm interested in ones work that is so fabulous. Keep it up. I give it a 5 out of 5.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your lemon of Cloud and Aeris is great! Loved the romance too.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles, then cries* Aww...that was so cute, sexy, and sad at the same time! Great job on this! I had read a couple of fics where she came back to visit him, but I have to say that this is my fave! n_n
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, that was so cute. :) it was well written and highly enjoyable. :) Aeris and Cloud is my favourite couple. I hope you write more. :)
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
completely retarded, and your style of writing is awkward and severely lacking. You have loads of sentence fragments and one of your biggest problems is that you repeat this pattern: "gentle hands slid..." "green eyes widened..." "massive hands gripped..." WHOSE?! Yes, we know whose, but as the writer it's your job to write fluidly so that the reader isn't thinking that there are like a hundred other people in the room with them.
And the sex scene was cheesy. And how the hell does an angel take a picture of herself in bed with a guy?
And the sex scene was cheesy. And how the hell does an angel take a picture of herself in bed with a guy?
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Oh my god, it's so sad... *cries*
...but it's so good... *cries more* TT_TT
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...but it's so good... *cries more* TT_TT
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