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your beta was not very good for this chapter. quite a lot of mistakes. kind of ruined the story for me really. meh

briliant i would love to read more if you ever add more.

Hey, I love your fanfiction, I read like most of them and they are so good. I was wondering if you could do some more Raijin/Squall pairings, I never really thought of them together until read this story, and now I want more. Never stop writing, you're a great writer!

Uh, me again, if you did do another Raijin/Squall pairing could it not be NONcon, I like Squall being the uke but a I'm not into him being forced...sorry...

phew that was a great read. i am conflicted too whether to feel happy or sad for squall lol. but you HAVE to continue this story plzzzzzz ;3 i'll give you a nice warm cookie for it. pretty please! i wanna see more

I would certainly be interested in another chapter of this. I like your writing a lot! please continue and I support you!

Yay for threebies!
I gotta give ya credit, I love what you've done to Seifer. He's like this evil/sexy/cruel/sex god/bastard that just knows how to push Squall's buttons.
Love, keep on writing!
PS: have you been to the AFF.net forums? They have a ton of beta's there willing to help with editing^_~

Hotness :)

Uh, I think my brain is mush now. Good mush. I decided to read some of your other fics after finding "To Trust a Cop."

This one's darker, definitely NC, but I like the realistic psychology--Seifer denying that he's actually raping Squall and being turned on by controlling Squall's reactions, and Squall being confused and ashamed by his body's arousal. I'd really like to see if you could write a sequel and keep the psychology real while not making it totally miserable. It couldn't turn out fluffy, but hey, I don't read NC for sweet endings. (I would like to slap Seifer upside the head, though. Could he ever realize he's not a god sent to molest mortals, or would that be too OOC?)

;_; I want a sequal for this one, too.