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for Just another day of training

by Shehanitan

person Matt
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! good job..this story is sooo addictive lol..i can't stop reading it!! Very well written and detailed...good job..lol i feel a little guilty for squall...it's like he loves it but i guess he needs more time to accept it..oh well i'm dying to c what u write next! Good Luck
person LadyYeinKhan
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay please update this. I'm an avid reader of "Hurt" and I wanted to see whatelse you had written. Please update this. It's so evil, I love it. Seifer's such an ass sometimes, but I really like this completely wicked fanfic. Poor squall. Update if you please
person LadyYeinKhan
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my apologizes. typo in the last one. IT's lover's trust that i'm an avid reader -.-' i need to stop going for two days with out a good nights sleep...
person Gigi
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot. I loved all three parts. You should definitely write more.
person Ulla
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
C´mon!!! This story was just fabulous from the beginning to the end, but I still demand more threesome between Squall, Seifer and Raijin.
But of course Raijin woudn´t be there every time since it is quite easy to picture Seifer being too possessive for sharing.
But please, please, please let it continue!
PS Irvine would be nice thing too to add ;)
person yo
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i think u should write that sequel.
person hopemia
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoooooo!
I'd love to see more of this story!
person hopemia
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe we can see something of what life is like.. when they get back to Garden... ?

I'd love that!

And.. I don't think Seifer would share.. or at least.. he wouldn't share all the time.
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. fantastic. Can't wait for the next part. I assure you i will be watching and reading. :P
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should just leave it as a seiferxsquall xDD I've never thought of seifer sharing