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for Just another day of training

by Shehanitan

person Honey Nut Loop
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey, can't wait for the next chapter. This is such a great story. ^-^
person Nate
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice descriptions, your fic is hot.
person Firenze1
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. It was very well written and the detail is well done. You have done an excellent job on this one. keep it up and write a follow-up chapter to this one.
person fukuyami
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow nice! you had me cracking up with those spelling errors lol but it was good nonetheless!
nibbles!? lmao!
person Dadella
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good!!
grammar blah blah blah

*heh*

I'd've personally liked it, if Squall wasn't all bent outta shape about it in the end, like, instead of crying, he liked it, or something...
but that's just me...

You might want to put that it's non/con in your description...
person Guenhwyvar
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, except for the typos. Not a combination I've seen before. But please add NON-CON to the summary, not everyone wants to read it.