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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute, smexy and sweet. A well-written SephxCloud pwp will always get a review from me. ^^
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And now, Zack needs to walk in and join in on the fun! Mwehehehe... And just out of fun, it's the "Sephirothic System of Ten Divine Names" or "The Sephiroth Tree!!!" Mwa hahaha!!! I want a Sephiroth Tree!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smut. Yum.
One thing though, about half way into your story, you switch from past-tense, to present-tense.
One thing though, about half way into your story, you switch from past-tense, to present-tense.
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for giving me credit! I'm glad to help out with constructive criticism, and I'm happy that you took it well!
Please make more fanfics! I'd love to read more of them!
Lauren
Please make more fanfics! I'd love to read more of them!
Lauren
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was a cute fanfic! Finally, a nicelemon story for Christmas. And finally, someone else who figures Cloud was a Pagan too!
For some constructive criticism, may I point out fsome spelling errors?
"... and was *leaning* stuff that wasn't even in the textbooks." The word should be learning!
"... he leans *foreword* then and places..." It should be spelt forward!
But other than that, this story was beautiful! More SxC please!
For some constructive criticism, may I point out fsome spelling errors?
"... and was *leaning* stuff that wasn't even in the textbooks." The word should be learning!
"... he leans *foreword* then and places..." It should be spelt forward!
But other than that, this story was beautiful! More SxC please!
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great Fic. n.n Though I have a few questions and I don't want to bug you at all, but is Ressurection still continuing? Or are you finished with it? I am pretty sure you ended it with a climax.. but anyway, I had to ask that. Keep the fics coming, I really love em n.n *gives Pocky* Merry X-mas
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope I'm the first to review!
Wow, you wrote "This chapter is dedicated to: Utterly Anonymous", THAT IS SO NICE OF YOU! *hugs repeatedly* I've never had anything dedicated to me before. Thankyouthankyou! *cough to regain nonexistant normality* well, this story is great, it's so sweet! I can only stand yaoi sap, never ever het sap (het teenage romances are so predictable nowadays), and this story is very, very good yaoi sap. It's nice to see Cloud not being fucked silly, and Sephiroth/Cloud is a great (and somewhat canon, depending on how you interprit the game) pairing. I like it (actually, I like all FF7 yaoi pairings if Cloud is uke...). Your story is very enjoyable, well written and Christmas-y. Cloud deserved a nice Christmas present like that.
Merry Christmas to you too. This maybe late saying, but I hope you've got most of the presents you've been hoping for. Take this time out to relax, enjoy yourself, and update Resurrection! Heeheehee... happy holidays. ^_^
Wow, you wrote "This chapter is dedicated to: Utterly Anonymous", THAT IS SO NICE OF YOU! *hugs repeatedly* I've never had anything dedicated to me before. Thankyouthankyou! *cough to regain nonexistant normality* well, this story is great, it's so sweet! I can only stand yaoi sap, never ever het sap (het teenage romances are so predictable nowadays), and this story is very, very good yaoi sap. It's nice to see Cloud not being fucked silly, and Sephiroth/Cloud is a great (and somewhat canon, depending on how you interprit the game) pairing. I like it (actually, I like all FF7 yaoi pairings if Cloud is uke...). Your story is very enjoyable, well written and Christmas-y. Cloud deserved a nice Christmas present like that.
Merry Christmas to you too. This maybe late saying, but I hope you've got most of the presents you've been hoping for. Take this time out to relax, enjoy yourself, and update Resurrection! Heeheehee... happy holidays. ^_^
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it!
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! ^^ I so happy...
It be very lonely at my place with just my brother and me. Oh well, Merry Christmas to you too!
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It be very lonely at my place with just my brother and me. Oh well, Merry Christmas to you too!
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