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for Merry Christmas, Vivi Ornitier

by vivilover69

person Anon
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vivi/Eiko ftw
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would say no flames are appropriate o_O
The amount of things people change in their fics, describing a Black Waltz as a female is nothing. After all, people pair Aeris with Sephiroth don't they? ;)Much as I'd like you to continue with updates, they're your fics so don't apologise for leaving them! I love Vivi, and I've been reading all your stories, so it is my turn to apologise for never reviewing before now.

As for your next fic... I would vote for Little Maid Boy, for the purely shallow reason that it has Kuja in it... Hahaha ^_^ Pick whichever one you enjoy writing most. (how very unhelpful I am!)
person N. Fasciitis
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I actually like the idea of a slash/yaoi pairing with Vivi in it. The story itself started off kind of slow but if it were continued, has the potential to be pretty good. It would be a waste to leave it as is.

My one gripe: Black Waltz 2 is NOT a female. All three Waltzes are genderized as male; even Dagger refers to Black Waltz 2 as 'he'.
person Kiki
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a very talented writer
person Z.V.
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sappy... but you gotta love it. Update quickly please!
person Houou
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Mumbles something about how he hoped this story will be a oneshot, single chapter bliss*
*Groans*
It still was a very good first chapter tough. Please continue. ^^