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for Push It Redux

by greywitch

person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fuckin' amazing. Keep it up.
person midnightlily
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story was so fuckin' awesome! oh my god. i would have never thought of this story line. it was amazing. keep posting stories like this and you'll be the most liked author here.
person fragile_lion
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good,,, really good.
person L.J
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! I just wanted to let you know that as a fellow author, I know authors crave feedback so I thought I'd leave a little review to say that I loved this ficcy and I'll bribe your muses to make you write more FF8 stuffs. Keep up the great work!
person yukiko
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, sweetie I'm leaving you my e-amil adress, tell me when you'll do the sequel. I really loved the push it series, and can't wait for more.
person Tyr
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really flickin hot. I'm glad Seifer found his Squally. ^_^. I absolutely love the way you write, and you write excellent lemons. I can't wait to read some more of your stories.
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, extremely hot. My only issue is that Squall and Seifer killed all those innocent guardsmen who were only doing their job, just because Squall wanted to prove an emotional point with Seifer. It's minor, but it makes them both look like heartless and arrogant bastards. Killers. I normally wouldn't say anything, but it struck me as being OOC.
person Iron Dog
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The scene with the dead guardsmen was intentional. They (Seifer & Squall) were dangerously unbalanced when cut off from each other. Seifer was burning irrational rage, giving no thought to his actions or the consequences of said actions. Squall turned in the opposite direction to the cold, trained killer he was previously. He knew what he was doing, he simply didn't care. Once together again, balance was restored. Squall knew that in doing so (seperating them to force Seifer to realize what he felt), it might have dire consequences for both of them but Squall felt that the ends justified the means.

I could have explained this all as an epilogue, but I did want to leave a few questions hanging in the air to allow me to do a follow up arc. If there are any other things anyone would like explained or to discuss further and you just can't wait until I get my butt moving on said arc, feel free to email me at the address provided on my author page. Thanks for reviewing.
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I loved this fic from start to finish! I will looove you forever for making this lovely fic possible and I am now a BIG fan. Please write more in the future as I adore you and weee! Push It Redux kicks ass!
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gags on the happy ending* No, just kidding. That was the perfect way to end it, although my internal Seifer is protesting actually having to say what he feels out loud. Yummy hot sex, great visual of Seifer glowing with fire, and your Laguna is just funny as hell. Kinda sad to see this end, but whatever else you write will be more than worth it as long as these two get to have lots of hot, kinky sex.

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