rate_review Reviews

Okay, first I write pointless smut and then I come and read this chapter...my mind is going to be sunk in a very deep gutter for a long time because of the image of those three guys together even though nobody got fucked. Your Seifer is now in a place mine is probably going to end up in one of these days.

Seifer: Okay, I banged Irvine, but I still wanna play with Squall, bitch.

See, my muse is insane. Keep up the good work.

CP the, to be blunt, aroused

This is an excellent fan fic. I'm enjoying it tremendously! The story and dialogue are great, and the sex scenes are very steamy. Good Job!

o.O wow never cross Squall and Seifer at the same time. ^___^ Loved the chapter! Please update soon!

I really like this story. It is amazing how you took a pwp gave it and plot. The story really took off.

Damn, I sure hope this wins something because it would be a shame if it didn't. It's really good - both plot and smut - and I've got a weakness for fics that go more into the author's thought's on the Sorceress/Knight deal. Great chapter, write more. If your beta is too slow, just do what I do. Post anyway, then revise when s/he is done unless you know your issues are extreme.

Seifer: Less reading and review, more writing. Damn bitch, keeps teasing me and then she stops writing in the middle of something good.

CP the odd (you'd be too if Seifer talked to you like that)

Wow, this is a great fic. I love the way you portray the characters, and the touch of angst is a great addition. Please update!!!

YEAH!! update...i love updates and i really loved this chapter. I loved seeing Squall be all bad ass and pissed off. I can't wait for your next chapter

making me sad with the no updating for weeks....really really sad...please finish your story, cause then i won't be sad!

No Seifer! >< Curse whoever stabed him!! I hope he'll be okay! Please update soon!

nooooo! you cant stop there! damn evil cliffies! *pouts* seifer better be okay...... squall didn't get to tell him that he loves him yet......