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for Cops can't be trusted

by Shehanitan

person deaths cackle
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, if the sequels as hot as the original i say go for it. the kink be goood.
person Pwetty Blood
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gapes at computer* That was fucking awesome! I totally adore Uke Squall, he's just so cute when he's submissive... *runs off to re-read several times* You should make a sequel!!! Make a sequel!!! Make a sequel!
person ashley
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was hot, please write a sequel!!!
person ren
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hothothot

sorry squall but this is too delicious
person jkl
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... REALLY hot... really really nice. will love to see a sequel!!
* sorry squall *
person Oceanserpent
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want a sequel! Seifer and Squall must get together!
person beni-vash lover
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this was absolutely awesome!! I just couldn't stop reading it!!(who wouldn't?) Anyhow, I hope you write more like this-but until then, I'll see ya later, peace!
person Hot Fan
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very hot. Maybe in the next chapter you could add the kinky stuff like bondage and spanking. Hoping for more from you soon.
Keep up the awesome work.
person QueenAdreena
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, can't be arsed to sign in. Anyway . . . Interesting. Lot of typos but at least you admitted it. Only read first chapter so far due to lack of time, but it entertained me. Good job.
person lonewolves66
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cops really can't be trusted, me and a friend got stopped for speeding, and the cop said we could "repay him in other ways" Needless to say, none of that happened XD; I took my ticket with a few un-lady like words to that perv cop. ^^(then again what am I...reading this and liking..?¬¬) Anyway, I loved it~ So hot XD Update maybe? Like when Squall gets a certain visitor ::winkwink::