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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...Nice! VERY nice! I hope you do a sequel, but this time perhaps with just Seifer and Squall, and some side stories with other parings. ^_^ You can make nice long hot...steamy..chapters...ahem! ^__^ *gives you a cookie and FFVIII plushies* Congradulations on finishing!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you were nervous about this. This is what the art of mindless pwp is all about.
It turned out wonderfully and even more so because Zell must've been a real pain in the posterioir parts of the anatomy to write.
It wouldn't hurt if you, now that the hard part is over, went over and edited the chapters for those unfortunate spelling mistakes and other little thigies and fine tuned this baby into perfection.
And now, if you'll excuse me, I'll go and take a Very cold shower...
It turned out wonderfully and even more so because Zell must've been a real pain in the posterioir parts of the anatomy to write.
It wouldn't hurt if you, now that the hard part is over, went over and edited the chapters for those unfortunate spelling mistakes and other little thigies and fine tuned this baby into perfection.
And now, if you'll excuse me, I'll go and take a Very cold shower...
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gimme the next chapter NOW! I mean it I'm going crazy I don't care how many reviews you have; for the sake of my sanity post the next chapter!!!
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was gooooooooood. Really good.
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee, more Squall abuse. Now I'm seriously tempted to increase the cruelty factor the next time I get around to writing Seifer/Squall sex. *Ignores the voice in the back of her mind pointing out she has a rape fic to finish one of these days* This was very good, very hot, and I really enjoyed every chapter. Hell, I reviewed every chapter.
CP the, umm, distracted
CP the, umm, distracted
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOT! this was sooo hot! *bows down before your greatness* thank you so much for writing this. i absolutely loved it. looking foward to seeing and reading more works by you. so until then, later! ^____^
Devious Lil Devil
Devious Lil Devil
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa..........*blinks a couple of times then wipes the blood from her nose* sugoi............. that was sooo goood. there were a few typos here and there but the greatness of the smut would totally make the reader overlook them. if you ever needed a beta please look me up! i'd be happy to help. oh and my choice is for irvine and zell. *get a dazed look on her face from thinking about zelly and squally getting hot and heavy then shakes it off* but... um ... yeah. lovely work. i cant wait to read more! so unil next time, ja!
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More soon please, and I would vote fore Irvine and Zell.
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would really like it if you put irvine and Rajin in there not to crazy about zell taking someone he seems like the kind to take it instead of giving any way great story
thanks for the entertainement
thanks for the entertainement
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great! great! oooh....irvine and zell! yah...that'd be hot.....a gangbang Squall uke.....hehehe.....can't wait for the next chapter!