rate_review Reviews

I think this story is awesome! Very well put! First time I've ever seen Seifer described so.....Seirfer-like! Anyway, I think the two shadows should be Irvine and Zell! Raijin kinda bugs me..... with his 'ya knows' ya know! AHHH!!!! It's spreading like a disease ya know!!!! AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! End the rage now!

too hot to imagine. the next pairing should be zell and irvine. keep up the great work

great. I think it should be Irvine and Raijin becasue Zell is too nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope this help you towards your 6 more reviews target.

Typos are still bad, but at least not as bad as last time...and I vote for Irvine/Zell to appear in the next chapter. Squall abuse is a lot of fun to read and write, so keep torturing my favorite bishie. ^_^ The sex was good to read and your Seifer is fun.

CP the weird

definitely well written and entertaining, i love the bad cop attitude, poor squall, whom i don't like that much so serves him right
i vote zell !!!! i vote zell !!!!!!

Zell and Irvine but I kind of wanted it to be just only Seifer and Squall. Love the smutty fic

I'm back and I'm endlessly glad to see that you're back, too. *smirks* The text keeps getting hotter and better.
There were quite a few misspellings but I don't know if anyone has ever managed to completely get rid of the buggers.

I can see your problem... Well, I'm glad that Irvine is included either way, we all want to see that cowboy do some riding. As for the other... Hmm. I'd say Raijin. Because I simply find that Zell doesn't have the characteristics for something like that, especially with Seifer. I can't even see him being the top outside of a warm and trusting relationship. I have my prejudices. Now Raijin, then... He's big, he looks threatening, and when we remeber his history in the game as a member of the Disciplinary Committee... *grins* Okay, We all know he isn't so bad but it's just a step commpared to the mindless leap it would take to do it with Zell.

But remember, these are just my opinions.
Keep going strong!

to lazy ot log in.

that was really nice start.

hopeful you will keep writing maybe put quistis and irvine in it together,

i just love quis and irvy just as much as i love squall and seifer and thats a whole lot

any way keep writing please


thanks for the entertianment

that was quite a good story especially if what you said about it being your second lemon! good job :)

heres a review. now onto chapter 2! =D