rate_review Reviews

You can be pretty damn proud of yourself after writing that.
Usually when I read dirty talk it just makes me giggle but that was hot...

There was quite a few spelling mistakes but nothing that would cause the world to end.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, let's just hope that poor Squall doesn't get any permanent injuries... Just something that makes me wonder... Why does everyone always write Seifer to have this huge monstrosity of a cock?

Nice job. That was really intense. I liked it. I hope to see more from you. keep up the good work.

Very porn-ish. I wonder if you're a guy. But yeah, it was hot, so keep going!

I want another chapter. This was great. ^-^

Great story. Haven't read one like that yet. Nice job.

Aside from the massive number of typos found in there, it wasn't too bad...although AU's really aren't my thing and I just read it because it's Seifer/Squall smut. The sex was good and your Seifer was enough of a bastard to be believeable, though it's easier to picture him being the one to ride a motorcycle and drive entire too fast than to imagine Squall doing it.

CP the voiceless

... I read it. All of it. And i enjoyed it. >:) Please write more. (What else can I really say?)