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for Red Dawn

by sweetstarlights

person Fenris
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, you have to finish this, it isn't right to leave Eve dead.

Ler me know lord.of.the.vampires@gmail.com
person yuki_meiseki
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was.... incredible... and yes... u MUST absolutely write the sequel. lolz.
person Emey
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If your not gonna post could you e-mail later chapies to me! I wanna know if something else is gonna happen! And reading inspires me to write!
person Rodent
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good writing, good plotline, needs a little grammar touchups, but what the hey? It's a whole lot better than the other crap on AFF.
Gratz on a great story.

Reading the sequel on ff.net now.
person Emey
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT ILOVE IT I LOVE IT! It sounds so realistical! YES YES YES do the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person iki
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good
person vivilover69
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm, not bad...not bad at all ^^

vvl 69