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This is the best description of a relationship between Aeris and Cloud I've ever read. If you care to know, I happened upon this story years ago and read it when it was only three chapters. When I randomly found it again today, I idly wondered if it would be as good as that one I read way back; then I realized it was the same one XD.

Even though it's been ~3 years, I hope this story hasn't been shelved indefinitely. I'd love to see it completed.

I think I'll go back and read the whole thing again. ^_^

This is a great story when is the last chapter coming?!

COME ON!! UPDATE, UPDATE!

noooooooooooo... why did you have to come up with a cliffhanger like that one *glares* just when things were getting red hot.

anyway this fic.. damn well written, great job.

so now hurry up and update this thing soon will ya?!

Really Im quite disappointed. Not in the story though, because this is actually quite well written and thought out I would guess. Because usually on here, theres just pointless Lemon/Lime stories just to fill ones content, which I find disappointing. Not many of them have actual plots and most of them just scream out "I love you" in the heat of passion, whether or not they really mean it.

Although this, this is a work of great art in my opinion. They seem in character, because as we all know it, Aerith is quite ...flirty. At least to Cloud, hehe. What Im disappointed in is that you havent updated since 2005. Its 2006 now and I really hope that youll finish that chapter you promised us. Its terrible to leave us all hanging like that.

I absolutely adore Cleris, so when I stumbled upon this fic I was like "oh this so awesome man!". But, when I realized that a guy was writing a Cleris (a really well written one to boot) I was like woah! In a good way ofcourse, lol. Most guys I know prefer Cloti because well...Tifa's assets ARE rather large (abnormally so in my opinion) and well they tend to be annoyed by Aerith. You have great skills as a writer and I'm glad you were able to write a Cloud x Aeris fic with smut and plot. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my god!! Such a good story. Please, please, please, please update soon. I love how Aeris is taking charge like that.

I would like to say that your writing is amazing. I like the way you set up the story, and don't just rush into things. The only thing I did not like was the way Areis turned out to be in this story, but like you said this is an AU, and other then that one fact, I am enjoying this story. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read further chapters of this story.

Thank you for the update =)) I really love your story (CXA are so cute ^^) and I can't wait for the last chapter ;) Keep up the good work

this isnt going to get updated, ....is it?