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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work! I've been searching for a good Cloud/Aeris fic forever! There just aren't enough of them. I like your style and the whole plot thing is awesome. You've got my upport! Can't wait to see some more! Please update soon, I'd love to see Chapter 4!
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when will you post a new chapter? please, I love your fic!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay~!!! im happy to see a Cloud/Aeris ficcie!!! great job! please update soon i cant wait till they meet~!! ^-^
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, let's see some more! Please!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I love your fic :)
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
C'mon, c'mon... This was just getting good! From a plot perspective, that is. Don't stop now! Go go go!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAAA! You HAVE to update soon im dying here....the pain of waiting is to much!!!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent start. I can't wait till it really gets started ;)
A comment, though; you might want to change some of the things Cloud says to himself (particularly in the first few chapters) to thoughts instead of having him say them out loud. As it is, it seems a little weird with Cloud walking around seemingly talking to himself. All in all, though, very well done, and I hope the chapters to come are just as good.
Kudos to going with Aeris/Cloud. There's not enough fics of that pairing here. Keep writing!
-avalon21
A comment, though; you might want to change some of the things Cloud says to himself (particularly in the first few chapters) to thoughts instead of having him say them out loud. As it is, it seems a little weird with Cloud walking around seemingly talking to himself. All in all, though, very well done, and I hope the chapters to come are just as good.
Kudos to going with Aeris/Cloud. There's not enough fics of that pairing here. Keep writing!
-avalon21
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. But why on Earth did you make Cloud and Tifa hook up (even if only temporarily)?! *wails* You did say it's supposed to be a CloudxAerith fic after all, why spoil the fun. *pouts*
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeal* IT'S A CLOUD/AERITH FIC!!!!!
*dances around happily*
You have a wonderful style here, and I can't wait to read more! :)
*dances around happily*
You have a wonderful style here, and I can't wait to read more! :)