AFF Fiction Portal
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so fuckin hot! Made me cum! lol Really it did. I love how rough Seifer was with Zell! Could use some more blood and torture though, but even so, This was the best fuckin non-con I have ever read, and I'm on AFF every night! btw this is the only review I've left on this site in 3 years. Yeah your writting is that hot! More plz! :D
person >_<
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot but dark at the same time, you can really feel the characters rolling out of the page. Zell is unwilling but tortured and Seifer is totally sick and also smitten by Zell. I'm amzed by your imagination and talent. I'm just thankful you shared this piece with the world and hope you'll continue to write more stories **
person Autumn
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my fucking god......sickness..why would youu treat poor sweet Zell like that.....>.< i like zell being the uke...i don't like him abused...ok..i lied about that..i do like this story and i do like sexy raped zell...in a sick painful kinda way....which sucks..i love him so much..and yet...
person JRos
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ive finally updated. i added two new chapters.
person Rikkimeko
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best Non-Con I ever read! It is hard to find good ones like these. I love the pairing because it seems like Seifer would be the perfect Dominant character and Zell the submissive character. Althought, the real crime is heinous. You should write about how Zell deals with the aftermath.
person Lucain
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was awesome! So dark and twisted and completely in character for Seifer! Well done!
person Cassandra
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should do like a next moring thig, where Zell tries to get on with life and Squals worried.
person DM
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nasty Seifer! heh heh heh. XD
person Alice
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, really well written!
maybe write a bit of aftermath... or throw in a bit of squll stuff. I dunno. just wanna see it in your writting that's all, cause you're so good!
Keep it up!
person Iwi
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised at how well written it was. it's really good.
but.. oh, how sad!