rate_review Reviews

Oh...wow...I just, I mean, wow. That was amazing...that thing at the end about how everyone's going to change him, I can just so imagine Squall thinking that, feeling that, wanting Seifer by his side when everyone else is trying to change him.

You know what? The ending of this made me cry. No, seriously, it made me cry. It's so beautiful. :( Thanks for writing this, it's one of the most amazing fics I've ever read.

Awwwww... I love this fic!
It was so sweet and sad and exciting and beautiful and... It was everything and in just the right places, too.
It was wonderfully written, and reminded me a bit of Redrum's amazing fic "Proving Our Love", with this same pairing. I admit that this was more emotional and in perspective with the the rest of the world, but the basic thought is the same, ne?

Well, I have to say the opening paragraph made me wince. Try reading it aloud to yourself, that might help with your grammatical errors. The sentences just don't flow or worse, they sound like the stuff of romance novels. I like SxS, but I like it when both men are men. You've written Squall as a woman for the first half of this. Just keep that in mind. It's alright to make men vulnerable, but their appeal is that they're men.

All I can say is... SxS forever!