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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i really like this story do you think you could email me when you update I'd really appreciate that.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i think this is a great story. Personally i can't wait for an update. You'd better not be giving up on me. Always finish what you start. I want to kow what's wrong with Squall!!!! btw when exactly was this mysterious squall dissapears then reappear? U've probs already said and i've just forgotten. Was it D-district? did you just change where they found him?
I Love this story like all your stories. Update soon ok?
I Love this story like all your stories. Update soon ok?
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't worry so much, i still like the story. besides, some plot is nice among the many many lemons (not that i don't read and love those). my advice is to just keep going, cause maybe you'll get to a place you really like.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I think this chapter makes things entirely too complicated. It was easier when I was just thinking of it as Seifer trying to get used to Squall being a masochist and needing the pain to get off, but with the addition of the possible brainwashing and all that, I don't know what to think. Have it get simple again, somehow?
CP the confuzzled
CP the confuzzled
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome combination of smut AND plot AND character development (esp Seifer)! I cannot wait to see what happened to Squall *frustrated*
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey u updated but you so ave to write more. This is fantastic. I need more. Need to know what is happening. Update as soon as you can ok?
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Yelps* Damn, your Seifer can be a sick fuck sometimes. I like it XD. But all that aside, this story is coming along really well. I feel sorry for Squall and I want to know what happened to make him like this. Please tell us soon?
CP the sore (damn wisdom teeth)
CP the sore (damn wisdom teeth)
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I got from it is that Squall had a lover before and was mistreated by him. O.o not raped, but abused maybe? Keep going, I like this story.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is there a way i can sound motivating and not complaining if i ask when your next chapter is coming out? I just really like your story so far and hope you i'll get more soon.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo lovely, and I'm positive I could kiss your beta! And my kisses are famous... *raises a suggestive eyebrow*
I'm not entirely sure what to make of this plot yet, but you really seem to know what you do best. Lemons have rarely been this good, and there's just something about a slutty Squall that treats my kinks.
Keep going strong!
I'm not entirely sure what to make of this plot yet, but you really seem to know what you do best. Lemons have rarely been this good, and there's just something about a slutty Squall that treats my kinks.
Keep going strong!