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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. If i strangled you i wouldn't be able to find out what was going to happen. Great chapter I'm soooooo glad you updated. Well til next time.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is well thought out. I can't wait to see if squall can be helped. Keep up the good work
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know you said you want to end this soon, but i am still really enjoying it. I'm not that great and suggestions or criticism, so i'm just excited to see where you take it next
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plot twist! *agonizing* what's squall thinking?? ahhhhh!!
thanks! that's a weird converstation b/t laguna and company... imagine telling your friend's dad that you set him up with a guy...
thanks! that's a weird converstation b/t laguna and company... imagine telling your friend's dad that you set him up with a guy...
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SMUT!! *Glomps* Yeah, I wanna know what Squall's thinking, but I'm glad you're taking this one little bit at a time and leaving us all wondering. And believe me, you're not taking a while to update. Some people go months between chapters.
CP the lazy
CP the lazy
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**PLEASE CONTINUE**. It held my attention and was pretty easy to read besides some minor errors. I love the plot, and you should put up another chapter SOON.
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No sex, but still a good chapter because it let us all see that Seifer really does care about Squall and that he's genuinely concerned about him. Write more, please?
CP the cheerful
CP the cheerful
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story - smut AND plot. Keep going. ^_^
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well it held my attention. I thought it was great. Just a few spelling/grammatical errors. I love all your storie sand think you are a great writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. This really is great. Seifer and squall all the way. They are by far the best couple and lucky for me, you seem to agree. :P
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how the story is developing. I think it will help if you re-read your story and have someone else proof read it. Some of your tenses do not flow. Keep up the good work.