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by Shehanitan

schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dunno about anyone else, but I'm really liking this since your Seifer actually seems to care about Squall, unlike some other stories I've read. Please, please continue and it might help my muses come back faster than they already are.

CP the miserable
person lynn
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do like it and i definatly think its worth continuing. I like your Seifer as well, so don't worry.
person hopemia
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh.. I do love sweet and sappy Seifer... I believe Seifer would be dominate, posessive, and loving.. all in one!

More!
person lo
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I like the concept of the stroy. Don't worry you did not get sappy, I've seen digustingly sappy stuff, you were in the clear. There was more than just sex, it was also a breaking of destructive mental barriers and Seifer was patient enough to try and help Squall, I like that.
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes it is worth continuing. No it is not bad. Just a different style. This is fine, really good. Problems only start to rise when seifer gets too soft in a story but i think you capture him perfectly.
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
V-day smut...yummy. That's really all I have to say about this.

CP the *ahem* distracted
person hopemia
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... hat was hot.

Seifer and Squall are so perfect together.. yum.
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i don't know what should happen but i do know that i think all your stories are great.