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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UUUUUUUGHH! UPDATE! *sobs* so good. must.. I NEED MORE!
Look at that. LOOK AT THAT! ^^^^^ You awsome writing skills have made me into and embarassing fangirl. I think I desearve a new chapter up soon for that.. don't you? ;)
Look at that. LOOK AT THAT! ^^^^^ You awsome writing skills have made me into and embarassing fangirl. I think I desearve a new chapter up soon for that.. don't you? ;)
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh the worst place to leave off haha wll it's getting too good! my eyes were completely glued to the screen while reading this chapter it was so sweet!! please update when you can!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCK I LOVE THIS STORY!! OH YES, THE REST, THE REST PLEAAAAAAAAAAASE!!!
/Squall/ Heeeeeyy!! I thougt you loved me!! Why you want to read this... This torture of me?!
But because i love you, exactly!^^ So, good luck, and congratulation, very!^^
/Squall/ Sorry, but i can't say the same...
/Seifer/ Fuck, Fic's writers are so much more sadistict than me...
/Squall/ Heeeeeyy!! I thougt you loved me!! Why you want to read this... This torture of me?!
But because i love you, exactly!^^ So, good luck, and congratulation, very!^^
/Squall/ Sorry, but i can't say the same...
/Seifer/ Fuck, Fic's writers are so much more sadistict than me...
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...there is more? >< wonder if it's the good or more painful stuff? >< wha i feel so bad for squall and seifer! please update soon, also sorry but i am a veryy indecisive person...so yeah ^-^;;;
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What!?!??! That's it!!!!!!!!???????? ..ooh I'm being impatiant... Um okay lets redo this review..
...This chapter was very, on the edge of your seat kind of suspensful. Evil little cliffy you have here! Yet again, I'm willing to sacrifice dinner for a month, and my favorite jacket and boots for an update. So, as inspiration I shall say.
1..2..3
WRITE!
WRITE!
WRITE!
WRITE!
WRITE!
..Not that i'm being demanding or anything... >.>
...This chapter was very, on the edge of your seat kind of suspensful. Evil little cliffy you have here! Yet again, I'm willing to sacrifice dinner for a month, and my favorite jacket and boots for an update. So, as inspiration I shall say.
1..2..3
WRITE!
WRITE!
WRITE!
WRITE!
WRITE!
..Not that i'm being demanding or anything... >.>
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you have to hurry and update! I'm having trouble waiting!!!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ah i can't take it anymore no more cliffhangers! XD I feel so bad for Seifer!! please update when you can.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMH UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I actually cried during this chapter, and I really need to know what will happen. Lol
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a chapter!! Damn i'd hate to be that guy if he's still alive when Seifer gets to him!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story, as the sadist in me. Though, there are a few grammatical things I would like to point out that can help your writing, such as 'was'. When referring to the past, use 'were' instead of 'was', and when reffering to the future, if you will be reffering to the future, use 'will be', such as I just did. Mattress is spelled thusly: 'mattress'. Lastely, the term 'doesn't', is used when talking about a thing. 'Don't' is used when talking about a person or many people. That is all. Look forward to the next chapter. (Please note that my spelling of 'reffering' may not be accurate)