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by Shehanitan

person Yoshimi
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hyne!!! That was such a relief!! I thought it would never come!! Such a beautiful yaoi scene i love it!! *sigh* Now all you have to do is....CONTINUE IT!! I love where this is going and can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold. I wonder if Laguna will ever find Squall and what will he do with Seifer? Hmmm. I wonder what Laguna is thinking right about now? Well I guess that will have to come later then oh well. Any way keep up the good work and don't worry about the pace of the story so much your doing great!!!!
person Icz
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm kinda surprised Seifer isn't angrier about what happened to Squall, I figured he'd want revenge of some kind...
person Tyr
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! O.O That was so flicking hot. I've already read it twice. I love it! You did an excellent job.
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who knows what's gonna happen but i for one am happy. :-D
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...o.O so Shiva is ok with all this then...=P
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, if Squall whines or behaves like a cat one more time I'm going to have to carve my eyes out. He is human, right? You're a good writer, but remember that he's supposed to be a human male. So many yaoi writers want to make characters like him and Aya from WK turn into either girls or giant kittens.
person Brittny
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dances* Yay! You updated!
0_0...I wonder what is going to happen now?
person Brittny
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the way...that was fucking hot!
person yukiko
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuck good !!

for once it's making love and not hard sex. and it was as hot !!!
person Brittny
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*DOOOOM!* Update! *Summons Eden*