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This was really good, hehe. Cloud sure is a confused guy. First he wants it, then he doesn't, then he does again. But it makes the story interesting.

Rock on,
nutmeg

Very interesting! I never find good fics like these anymore! Please write some more~!

mm? how nice...^^

I like it =P

That was very hot.

A few nit picky things and facts; Sephiroth is not an ancient. He only thinks he is. His mother was a scientist named Lucredia, not Jenova (however, he did have Jenova cells in him, and Jenova isn't an ancient anyway) and his father is more likely Hojo than Vincent, but there is a debate between that.

Also, the names for races are capitalized. So ancient is a adjective, Ancient is the race of Ancients or Cetra.

Cloud never was a SOLDIER in the game. He just never got in for some reason or another, so it wouldn't be appropriate to call him a SOLDIER right now.

But if this is AU, then I guess all of this doesn't exactly matter. Sorry if I sound rude, I'm not trying to be. I justed wanted to let you know just in case you didn't.

O.O

So . . . much . . . sex . . .

Write more. Seph demands it.