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Was Eiko ever corrupted! Her masturbation toward the end was cute. Kuja is still scum for doing all that to her, though. He's so pretty and yet so evil...

I have to diagree with your statement at the end of the story that child molesters are nasty. I happen to be a pedophile, and we are not nasty. Sure, we might cause a little pain to a girl should we have sex with her, but nothing that a grown woman wouldn't go through her first time.

mmm that made me wana cum in eiko's butt too

Ha ha I wanted to be there instead of Eiko :-) Kuja rues!!!!

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Wow, you really ARE pathetic... writing a story you don't want to just to get flames? And taking it over at Live Journal to mock? LOL I guess people like you as well as the third reviewer really don't have constructive lives. ^o^ Its amazing how stupid this world gets and how bold ignorant mofo's are over the computer monitor. This sad world needs Armageddon because it just gets sicker and sicker. Go ahead and mock this at Live Journal to feel secure ^o^ I don't care, me and my friends at college will have fun laughing at you. Nice writing by the way but a crappy and twisted plot.

Hahaha, ingenius. I knew there was a reason I liked you right off the bat! I guess I'm one of the only people out there that can appreciate the thrill of writing something so abhorrently dark that it even disgusts YOU! I adored the shock-effect and even when the reader thinks "Oh God, can't get ANY worse then this", it undeniably does.

You use a fair amount of description, never over doing it (as I have the tendancy) but never leaving the reader wondering "what's going on?" It's again, truly ingenius. I can understand now why you like Monster! hahaha Good lord!

As far as flamers.. hehehe, aren't they fun? Seriously, I hate how people say "just ignore them!". ::rolls eyes:: Now where's the fun in that I ask?

So seriously, keep writing, it's excellent. Also, out of sheer curiosity, have you heard of the writing Contest that I'm holding on my site, The Kiss of Hell? It's a contest for the grotesque

::looks at your story::

Something I believe you'd excel at. You can find the "rules" and what not here if you're interested.

www.angelfire.com/vamp/camaro/contest.html

or just go to my site (if the addy doesn't show in this review.. sometimes it doesn't) by taking a look at my profile. Anyways, awesome fic.

Camaro

Writing a piece of fanfic that you don't want to write, just to get negative reactions? What a miserable, hateful reason to write.

...hehehe. How very dark.