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by kelsee

person Richelieu
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sameth, your opinion's yours, don't let that Heather bitch or this James guy get to you, they're obviously none too respectful for others opinions.

I really enjoyed the story, a little on the...sticky...side, but a nice read.
person Sameth
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Heather, that fuck those other guys statement WAS my opinion, maybe you should grow up, frigid bitch.....Still a good story though.
person James
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sameth, you're a moron. Shut up quickly before you're promoted to dumbass.

Great story btw, BitterRoot.
person ChrisDawg88
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good! Rikku is the hottest FFX character and this was a hot, descriptive scene. How bout a gangbang with the team and all three girls now?
person Heather
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah gee. Fuck the two who gave their opinion just like you did. Grow up *rolls eyes*.

This story was pretty good. Some of the word usage and jargon made me shudder but it was still quite good. Great job.
person James
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..............*shudders* Gods that was nasty...and not in the good way....
person Mo
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was er...special...I guess. Kind of like watching bad 70s porn. Bow chicka bowbow! XD
person Sameth
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey fuck those other two, great job! We need more stories like this and less of Harry Potter getting anally raped.