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for Hurt

by darksquall

person Akurei
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good. I was a bit wary at first, but my fears were dispelled. The characterization is so good, and I love the idea of Squall digging a deep hole for himself and then having to come out of it. I hope to see more soon.
person Elisa
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!! dun tell me u r gona stop here wid this cliffhanger??
Wat happen to Seifer?? Squall?? NO!! i beg u, u must continue.. u must... if not, it'll b a waste of a nice n good story..
Please let them be together again, it's really not fair after everything dat they hav gone thru...
Onegai!! please cont..
person Anony
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cried, so much, I'm still crying. I'm tired too, poor Seif' and Squall, I'm going to sleep now Night and can't wait for the next chapter but I'll be patient(sp?) I've got a headache now from crying...
person Rei Asakura
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohmyholyshit. That's not cool! Fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it. And email me when there's a new chapter. That'd be nice.
person Nikki
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read fanfiction recently, but I love coming back to it, especially stories like this. Poor Squall! It's very sweet though, I read it nearly straight through. Definitely a page turner ;) Keep up the good work! I'll be checking back!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Aren't you on fanfiction.net too? I always found your penname to be so memorable. Your stuff is yummeh :D I'm definitely loving this so far, I wish I had time to read it all the way through right now. The darkness of it is very... enticing XD Poor Squall. What HAS he gotten himself into...
person kati
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!!

person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo don't arrest Squall!! Seifer wake up!! >< ahh can't wait to see what happens next!! please update soon!!
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! Let Squally go! *Bites officers*
I'm so glad you updated! *resume biting*
person Corona
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the 'cliff hanger' endings, even though it is clearly marked: 'to be continued', I like how that last part was ended on a point of urgency.