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for Hurt

by darksquall

person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw that was funny hehe ice cube down the pants! ^-^ but now what will happen *sigh* please update when you can
person l_ange_hantent
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they didn't lock the door.. uh oh


oh and Seifer mentioned he was going to introduce squall to his friends but he didn't. Just a mix up I guess
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crap! I knew it was going to end like that....can't wait for the next chapter!
But, no pressure, ya know? :)
person florinoir
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! They are...SOOOOOO CUTEPERFECTGORGEOUSAMAZINGSEXYANDALLANDALL!!
I hope you conti nue this!^^ Good luck!^^
person Alonia
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been meaning to read this forever. Now that I am in the mood for this sort of thing I am really glad that I decided to. I've only read the first chapter so far but I'm totally drawn in. This is some excellent work.
person =)
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like muse!!! =D

nice story! your sex scenes are really hawt.
=D

keep it up!
=)
person kati
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait till next one!!

person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squal and Seifer are so cute haha their little love quarrels are so funny! Please update when you can!
person Kikvws
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love this fic!
person Kikvws
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic! Please continue!