rate_review Reviews

I loooovvved the chapter. It had the right amount of playful banter and real emtional parts. i liked the humour that helped keep it from being completely dark as well (especially when seifer had to help lift squall's arm so he could flick him off)I was worried you weren't coming back, but i don't mind the wait as long as you eventually update.

I liked this chapter and the wait was well worth it. It's nice to see Seifer with a caring attitude towards Squall. I also think you've got the withdrawl of Squall pretty bang on. It adds good realism to the fic. Just for the complete smut-loving, rabid yaoi fangirl here, you are gonna get them together soon aren't you? Aren't you? Please? I'll be waiting for the next chapter and thanks for the notice on this one. You rock. Keep up the excellent work.

Well done Girly.

We're liking this, except you're awfully mean to poor little Squall. :)

I really enjoy this story it goes through all of the motions of their healing process almost as if they are real people. This is A truely excellent story and I would really like to read more of it in the future.

You know I love and adore this fic. I love their give and take, and how each man is the other's greatest weakness. My favorite part so far is Seifer blushing: it's both so in character and unusual, I can see why Squall was amazed.

Great story still. love it.

Ooh, fantastic... I am also a huge fan of Race's Hero arc, so this is great... almost like a fanfic of a fanfic :) But I love the direction you've taken it and I can really tell you've made it your own, put a lot of thought into it. I'm totally absorbed and can't wait to see what happens next. Great work!

hope it works out for them... it's great so far!

First, I need to let you know Seifer/Squall is definatly not my favorite pairing, maybe because there is too
many of them... really, I dunno why, but I decided to give this fic a chance because i've read some of your
other works and I can definetly say your one hell of an author. Well in the end i'm pretty happy I decided
to give this a chance because its by far one of the best Seifer/Squall fic i've had the pleasure to come upon.
Your work is everything a great fiction should be! The interactions between the caracters and the feelings
expressed are just too precious. This story is sad and full of angst but it still give a us a feeling of peace
as to their feelings towards one another. I really adore the way your writing this, the fact the they talk to
each other is just perfect it help us understand exactly whats happening between them at this point in time.
(am I making sense? I doubt it.) I really do hope you don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews.
Remember this, fanfiction readers are mostly ungrateful bastards and bitches. (Yes, readers, this means
I want you to prove me wrong!!!) Anyways. I don't have enough praises for this story and my sleepy mind
is telling me I should keep some for later.

Thank you very much for this beautiful artwork,

-MoOdSWInG

P.S. BTW, i'm french and writing this at 4am, cuz i've read the 4 chs up in one go and coudn't let myself stop, so
this attempt to review might be a bit messed up cuz the fonction in my brain used for translation from french to
english decided to go to bed around 10pm. (ok, humor fonction asleep too -_-;;;;;) I'm sorry for that, promise
to do better later.

Ah, good. Another chapter up. This should hold all of following this wonderful story for a little while. Please sit your butt down at the keyboard and start typing the next installment. You're doing a great job. keep it up.

P.S. Thanks for the good review of my on-going Push It fic.