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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, detailed, emotional chapter. You're a great author and I love reading this story, even if your Seifer is sometimes just a little too nice for my liking. Keep it up, this is one time where I don't care how long it takes to get to the smuttiness.
CP the angsty
CP the angsty
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait! when seifer finds out just how messed up squall is .... they're very cute together.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Squall with emotions is always good in my books and seeing him as screwed up as you've got him is very refreshing. I also like the fact that Seifer is showing he cares for Squall. I really hope you'll continue with this storyline.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i love this story i hope you write more chapters
:P anyways see ya
:P anyways see ya
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've said it before and I'll say it again - I LOVE your characters. This fic has brought me almost to the point of tears more than once because of the emotion I can feel and the tension that's there between Seifer and Squall. It'll be a while before it goes away, I think, but it'll definitely be worth it when it does. Gods, I wish I could write like that.
You know, I've been trying to offer constructive criticism lately in my reviews, but I just can't think of anything that I didn't like about that chapter.
CP the emotional
You know, I've been trying to offer constructive criticism lately in my reviews, but I just can't think of anything that I didn't like about that chapter.
CP the emotional
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By far one of the most tragic and sad stories I've read. I'm hoping that it'll get happier eventually, but I have to commend you on how well this is written. It's not very often that reading something will make me remember some of the shit I've gone through in my life. Thanks and keep up the awesome work.
~Hawk
~Hawk
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, I usually like my Seifer as being the totally messed up one, but this is fun too. I love your characterization here, and the plot is shaping up nicely too. Write more and I'll review more. I love this fic and everything about it.
CP the pleased
CP the pleased
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i am really liking this. Its fun to think of what seifer will do to the guys who hurt squall. please write more soon.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such an awesome story!! You have some amazing skills and are putting them to use! This story totally rocks and I can't wait for more!!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing start! love it! WANT MORE =)