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Okay i like the story but to some of the reviewers that are complainning about them not taking your reviews. Why would anyone want a plain FLAME review. Reviews are meant to be constructive not down right insulting. I have a story on Fanfiction.net and I have a OC that some have called a Mary Sue but instead of FLAMMING me like you are doing to this author they gave me advice on how to bring the OC away from that. Not all OC's are Mary sues and what not. People don't need to stereotype Original Characters when we get that enough already in the freaking real world. People flame because: 1. they are too coward. 2. They don't know how to respect other people's work or 3. They are just plain idoits. It is really unfair to the author to get flamed for something they came up with. It takes alot of your time to make a story and just to get it Flamed is just down right mean.

first off, just calling her character mary-sue-ish isn't constructive critism...now if you actually put it nicely and give a few tips on how to help make her not so Mary-sue than that is good. what you had up was ruder, and could be consiered a flame...considering that she has this story posted....knowing how many fans hate original characters....I think that shows some bravery. Now if you actually gave her a constructive critism...she might have left it up....sorry, now please try again, coward.

Hmm. Why'd you delete the review I put here about how unoriginal and Mary-Sue-ish your story was...?

If you can't take constructive criticism, you shouldn't be fucking writing in the first place. Coward.

This SO screams MARY SUE!!!

Come on!
Read these ones already!

That was too short...
make it longer next time, kay?

Cloud and his posse, would NOT realize that this female Sephiroth is Sephiroth's sister just by her telling him and his who her parents are. They did not know at the time that Hojo and Lucrecia were Sephiroths' parents.

Secondly, it's just my opinion, but I can't picture Sephiroth having a sister named 'Beth'. Downplays the black-caped villains name, which is conceptual in origin. Again, just my opinion, but if you're going to do a self-insertion, insert your persona, not your name; I'm assuming it's your name.

Oh, and the whole fact that Beth immediately gives away her whole past upon Cloud's request?

That's the Ask for a story/Get a story policy for you right there.

Can anybody say, 'Metal Gear?!'

You brought this from another site, huh? Did you write it? If not, then you might want to prove that you have permission from the author to post it here.

so far so good I like the way you slowly work your character in, as well as Vincents sister, well keep up your work, I'll be reading.