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for If You Fall

by Elsewhere

person filiasan
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read your fanfics on mediaminer. This one is my favorite.
person Kaslinn
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT.
Thank you for writing some beautiful boy on boy smut that actually has depth and proper use of the English language. You have my thanks. Also, this has inspired me to write my own KujaxZidane piece. I'll make sure to credit you for the creative spark. Please keep writing. The world is in need of good writers.
person Tamago
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Just plane awsome! Kuja and Ziadane are just so CUTE together!! WEEE! *Runs around in fangirl bliss.*
person Lucien
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... best Kuja/Zindane on the site. I love how feminine Kuja is, yet he is still Seme. Love it.
person Lengliorla
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly great ! And you managed to solve my problems of feeling bad that I read inceststories with Zidane/Kuja. They're NOT brothers *tihi*! Seriously this was very hot and very well written I also liked your other story Scattered in the Sky.

Just one tiny tine little flame - You shoudn't have your characters call out "Oh Jesus!" in this kinds of stories because Jesus simply doesn't exist in this world. Otherwise it was great if you want to complain about my flame or just talk, mail me OK
person Judanim
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was beautiful. I didn't read the prequel, but I still got the gist of the story. It's rare that you find erotica from any fanfic genre (hell, even in the original category) that's actually good and not a sad attempt at writing. I believe this story ranks with those rare few.

- Judanim the Green Mage

(Gah, that sounded really mushy, didn't it? Oh well...)
person Ri
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed it alot. NIce story ^^
person vivilover69
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, that's so cuuuuute~^^

vvl 69