rate_review Reviews

This was an awsome fic. I loved it. Dark Squall recommended it to me and was it a worth while read or what. I really hope you continue to write fine pieces like this. You've made yourself another fan and that's noth something I say lightly (I'm pretty picky about what I read).

I love this fic ^^, though Quezacoatl is male, the Aztec God of the Skies, pretty featered snake thingy, heh.

Still the overall effect was brilliant whilst it didn't scare me the pictures it created in my minds eye were certainly brilliant and awfully grotesque. Though easily the strongest part of this story were the characters. Everything seemed natural, real and believable. I loved your Irvine and Seifer most of all. Keep up the good writing.

Great story. I enjoyed it all. Can't wait for your next!

Funny ending. Too lazy and sad to say more (three of my kittens got killed today)

CP the bleh

Thank you all so much for commenting and reviewing. I'm glad that I was able to have the characters behave reasonably and in character. At some point in the far distant future, there will probably be a sequel.

I did want to mention that I deliberately made Quez female. Shiva is not female nor associated with ice; Quezacotl is not a bird shaped flower, which is how it always looked to me in the game. I figure, they have chocobos and Sorceresses; it's another planet/realm/dimension; maybe they have different ideas of how these beings appear. In any event, it was only Zell's perception of the encounter; he's been wrong before.

Thank you again!

-Race

NOOOOO! you can't end a chapter like that!!! i command that you update now!!! ......please oh, please update now

Umm, Race, some of us are reading this at 2 AM, you know. I think listening to 1000 no Kotoba (the Japanese version of 1000 words) is all that kept me from jumping a couple inches out of my seat when Irvine saw the naked girls. Am I getting startled? Yes. Have I been scared to the point of not wanting to turn my lights off when I go to sleep? No.

Starting to rush the plot a little, I think, and this is beginning to feel almost predictable, but you've probably got some big loop planned for the next chapter. At least, I hope you do.

CP the jumpy

Hiya. It's me again. This is sooo amazing. I love it. So what's gonna happen next huh? huh? huh? tell me! Whats with the glowing. is Iblis still around? Is Squall ok? Surely he's pretty shattered. Well update soon. I can't wait and i know i won't have to wait long.

Fun chapter. I cracked up when Zell fell on Irvine, and I have the funny feeling that a certain cowboy will NOT be lying to lovely ladies in the future. Didn't scare me, though. :P. The battle scenes were great, though I'm wondering why people like to think that Quezacotl is female.

Only nitpicky thing (aside from the speed that seemed to fly by with) is that Phoenix Downs cure the status known as KO, being knocked out and unable to fight. Death is death, as anyone who's played FF7 will know all too well.

CP the annoyed (not with the fic, so don't worry)

Wow i love this. Brilliant. Update soon. Please. You've been really good at updating so far. Some stories take forever.