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by RaceUlfson

person xiang
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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*blinkyblinkyblinky*

l;kasdgh. Oh. My. Sweet. Jalepenoes. *blinkyblinkyblinky* You have no idea how incredibly much I love this story. I love it SO incredibly much that it's just. . .alkfjaslkdg. Yes. Well. Update soon please? I don't like Seifer that much, but being shot in the gut in then stabbed in the shoulder while a quasi-friend is yelling off in a different part of Garden is definately a BAD thing to have happened when a different quasai-friend is possessed by an evil ghost/demon-thing.

lsdkjgkl;gh. . .*shakes head* My Sweet Jalepenoes. . .
person QueenAdreena
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Leave us hanging, why don'tcha? That was a good chapter though . . .
person jazzbo22
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so interesting! I love the way it's going right now, update soon!! I love how it's so freaky, people killing themselves in the bathtub, eerie happenings in the basement, and Seifer with a past secret. Awesome job
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What?? How dare you end there. I need more i tell you more. U have to update this is an amazing story! Love it. How uch praise do i have to give you?It's 2 o'clock in the morning andi'mstill reading, does that tell you how good this is? update!! You have to update!!!!!








God i hate cliff hangers
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nope, not scared yet. But I am a little grossed out because of all the rancid blood and bad smells you keep mentioning. Your characters are still nice and believeable. The only area I'd say you're approaching cliche with is the lack of power. I've seen House on Haunted Hill one too many times, maybe.

Would've liked more description with the sex scene. Then again, I know that's not the main focus of this fic and I don't care if you choose not to elaborate on it in the future. Keep trying to scare me. Maybe you'll succeed.

CP the brave
person Nami
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love you
person Akare
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I love it. Especially all the references. Funnily enough it's always Emily Brontë that I forget, not Anne. I'm getting really curious now as to what's going to happen. Can't wait. Hope you update soon.
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, damn you're updating this fic often. And I'm actually started to get creeped out now. Your Squall is most definitely possessed by something not quite right and I'm scared of what he might do to the other guys before it gets stopped. I mean, it has to get stopped eventually, right? *Shudders at the mental image of Squall's bloody smile that only Seifer can see*

CP the unnerved
person QueenAdreena
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Made me laugh with all your metaphors, the plots starting to get a bit scary now! Update!
person DSC
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is brilliant because it's totally non-sterotypical and very unique for a FFVIII. It's not about 'evil Rinoa trying to keep Squall and new lover apart' or 'Seifer coming back to Garden' it's about horrible creepy things out to kill poeple and I like that. Like it a lot ^^.