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for The New Turk

by Sephirena

person Auron Revolutionist on AFF.net
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAAH! *screams and junps up and down* YEAH GO SEPHIRENA! \m/ *throws a party* Beautiful story! I can't wait for more! Please continue!
person Hana
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have me absolutely riveted.. I can't wait to read what happens next. :)
person Elizabeth Spiegel
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bout time you put some lemon in your lemonade.....and Tseng got laid.....I almost....ALMOST feel bad for the Reno bashing.
Reno: you should be ashamed.
But she isn't.
Reno: *sighs* I know.....this is just.....what did I do....seriously.....?
Nothing yet.....it's probably what you are going to do.
Reno: Who me?
*rolls eyes* Yeah you!
Reno:...
Anyway I can't wait to read more!
Reno:Enough Reno bashing though, seriously.
Nah, I like that part.
Reno: I thought you liked me!!!
I do....but it's funny.
Reno:*pouts* no it isn't
And it gets you to do that cute pout....
Reno:*scowls* that's it....I don't have to take this....I'm going to bed. *walks away*
Be there in a sec! Anyway, please update again soon.
person Hana
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I very much like your story. I am eagerly awaiting monday morning. :)
person Elizabeth S
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute, sweet, but waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay tooooooooooooo short.

I hope to read more soon, with a little more graphicness....it should be interesting.

Anyway.....I need sleep, now.....night!
person Leea
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must update!
Very much enjoying this one, TURK's baby, the best things in the game :D

X Leea X
person Elizabeth S
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could be such a bitch....but I won't be....I like the story too much.

Anyway, I have only one request to make of you................UPDATE SOON!!!
person BakaNeko
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better be glad I lent you rights to my O.C., but I see that you did well on it. Boy that was a long ass chapter, but I liked it. The second one was good too...

So, where's the smut you promised?