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i think this is a fantastic story is there gonna be anymore?

omg i don't normally like ff8 fictions that nivolved squall and a female (in my mind squall belongs to seifer) but i'm loving this. maybe cause you keep stopping him it keeps me wanting to read more to get to the tasty scenes >< (i'm bad like that) ANYWHO!! write more soon kk? love it

Hey there!!
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a while. OMG, this is SO good! I can't wait til the next chapter comes out. Keep up the good work. :D

please please please please let there be a happy ending!! oo and i know it's getting close to the end and im really excited to see what happens between squall and Lisa! oooo and vegas sounds great! maybe the elvis place?

we're getting married?! cool!! and this chapter was one of my favorite parts in the game! go Squall go Squall you saved Lisa! woop! oooo AND now they're ALONE! hehehe! can't wait for the next chapter!!

I told you the differences in text would work!!
And what are you talking about??? Its a great chapter! I love it! It was cute, and just showed how much Squall really cares about Lisa! Which is just SO sweet! And it also painted a different picture of Squall. As someone who's *had* girlfriends. Not as the usual picture of a frigid ass.
I'm glad they found each other again and now they're all alone... on the Ragnarok... and they have to fight monsters in colour order... but they're all alone... on the Ragnarok... thats the important thing.
...Ya see where I'm going with this? x)
I love chatting with you too! Its so much fuuun! Obsessing about our fellas!
~Silver

Okay, lemme go through from the start to the end.
OMG... so much love. Much love for Squall and Lisa. SOOOOO MUCH LOVE!!! They are, really becoming and OTP for me! I just love them together! And you're excellent at making scenes seem so real, that the reader just feels like they're... almost there. =D Its great! Your descriptive skills are fantastic! And you’re excellent at making a kissing image and intitmate image not seem monotonous… like a lot of writers do. So you made it very enjoyable to read. =3
I love the idea of an alterego, and Lisa seeing her parents distraught over her disappearance but completely unable to do something. The feelings were wonderfully put across, you did that so well!
I loved this chapter! *nodnod* And I look forward to the next chapter!

By the by, I put you on my AIM contacts list. I’m SilverWolverina.
~Silver

yeah the first CD is the best. nice long kissy scene too! woo! and *mouth gapes open* wow...this was a really great chapter. the whole, seeing Lisa's parents reaction to her 'dying' and her alter ego thingy talking to her. crap, I really can't wait for the next chapter now!! \m/\m/

Girl, it is awesome!!! I haven't had a chance to finish 13 yet, but I will soon. It's great so far. Keep up the good work. Talk to you later.

- Kishana

O_O Squall kissed her!! Yay!! Take that Riona! YEAAHHH!! I'm feeling crazy today, lol. The screen pictures were enjoyable to look at. (Pictures of Squall .. Yum?) And the chapter was pretty awesome and cool and so many words to describe >.<.