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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahaa!!! Rinoa, in your face! Squall doesn't like you!!
He loves Lisa! NYAAAAHHH!!!! XPPPPP
So much <333 for this chapter! (much like every other chapter you've written).
I love how Squall's all sorta... protective and 'I wanna make sure you're okay' towards Lisa now. And how he's warmed up! Thats just cute! Cutecutecute! I love his smile in the end sequence, so whenever you mention it, I just picture that smile!
I'm soooo happy you delivered! They KISSED!!! And Rinoa didn't interrupt!! XDXD Whooo-hoo!!
Not to worry, I will notify you when I upload or even get any thing more otehr than half of the second chapter written. (I write in a VERY bizzare way sometimes. =3;;)
Loved the images too! You got some of the shots I've never been able to find in online of Irvine's CGI intro! I LOVE YOU!
<3
I await the next chapter with bated breath! :D
He loves Lisa! NYAAAAHHH!!!! XPPPPP
So much <333 for this chapter! (much like every other chapter you've written).
I love how Squall's all sorta... protective and 'I wanna make sure you're okay' towards Lisa now. And how he's warmed up! Thats just cute! Cutecutecute! I love his smile in the end sequence, so whenever you mention it, I just picture that smile!
I'm soooo happy you delivered! They KISSED!!! And Rinoa didn't interrupt!! XDXD Whooo-hoo!!
Not to worry, I will notify you when I upload or even get any thing more otehr than half of the second chapter written. (I write in a VERY bizzare way sometimes. =3;;)
Loved the images too! You got some of the shots I've never been able to find in online of Irvine's CGI intro! I LOVE YOU!
<3
I await the next chapter with bated breath! :D
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARRRGH!! Damn review box! Stop eating my bloody reviews!!
I have so much love for this chapter!! I love how Squall is all sorta protective and 'I wanna protect you' towards Lisa. Even though she's less than enthusiastic to the thought. :D;;
And you delivered! They kissed! This makes me so happy!! Seeing as they were... rudely interrupted in chapter twelve. (Damn you Heartily!). I adore how you describe Squall as being kinda more relaxed and happy and smiling now. Its so cute! I just keep picturing the smile he has in the closing CGI sequence! Fskin' adorable!!!
Not to worry, I will tell you when I upload my story... when I get some more written other than the second chapter (I have... an odd way of writing.. Heheh =D;;;)
Much love for the chapter! Much like every other chapter!! =D
I await with bated breath, the next chapter!
~Silver
I have so much love for this chapter!! I love how Squall is all sorta protective and 'I wanna protect you' towards Lisa. Even though she's less than enthusiastic to the thought. :D;;
And you delivered! They kissed! This makes me so happy!! Seeing as they were... rudely interrupted in chapter twelve. (Damn you Heartily!). I adore how you describe Squall as being kinda more relaxed and happy and smiling now. Its so cute! I just keep picturing the smile he has in the closing CGI sequence! Fskin' adorable!!!
Not to worry, I will tell you when I upload my story... when I get some more written other than the second chapter (I have... an odd way of writing.. Heheh =D;;;)
Much love for the chapter! Much like every other chapter!! =D
I await with bated breath, the next chapter!
~Silver
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just wanna live! hehe i like that song. ha take that rinoa! squall doesn't like you! i love the screencaps, they're awesome and great chapter! bye!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......*smacks Rinoa upside the head* DAMMIT!!! DO YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO RUIN EVERYTHING?!
Phoenix: Naturally - she's a brat, what'cha expectin'?
Duley noted... Ah... Phoenix is ma FF OC. Your story got me inspired to sart writin' a story with her in... seein' as she's so underappriciated in my OC collection. (Don'cha worry, Squall's safe... She's an Irvine girl. Even though she denys it.)
However, onto the chapter!
Most excellent. I aodred the different points of view there, and a wonderful insight into a mind of Squall. He hates Rinoa! This is a good thing! And his feelings are becoming clearer for Lisa! I like that! Yes I do! Most certainly!
I loved the line... "'Cause I know that you would never even think of giving up on me, and deep down inside I know that I would never give up on you."' God it made me melt inside...
Really great! And they almost kiiiissed!! Dammit!! Bloody Rinoa!! Why can't she give other people a bit of time away from her brattishness! Stupid girl. ==;
Ah! About my review for the chapter previous - it was a lot longer than it came out as, it just seems the review box doesn't like faces. Yah know?
Anyhoo - I look forward to the next chapter!!
~Silver
Phoenix: Naturally - she's a brat, what'cha expectin'?
Duley noted... Ah... Phoenix is ma FF OC. Your story got me inspired to sart writin' a story with her in... seein' as she's so underappriciated in my OC collection. (Don'cha worry, Squall's safe... She's an Irvine girl. Even though she denys it.)
However, onto the chapter!
Most excellent. I aodred the different points of view there, and a wonderful insight into a mind of Squall. He hates Rinoa! This is a good thing! And his feelings are becoming clearer for Lisa! I like that! Yes I do! Most certainly!
I loved the line... "'Cause I know that you would never even think of giving up on me, and deep down inside I know that I would never give up on you."' God it made me melt inside...
Really great! And they almost kiiiissed!! Dammit!! Bloody Rinoa!! Why can't she give other people a bit of time away from her brattishness! Stupid girl. ==;
Ah! About my review for the chapter previous - it was a lot longer than it came out as, it just seems the review box doesn't like faces. Yah know?
Anyhoo - I look forward to the next chapter!!
~Silver
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh my god.... RIONA YOU SILLY WITCH!! Why did you have to ruin a perfect moment?!?!
Riona: .. Because-
Shut up! I don't want to hear your 'lame' excuses, ok?! *Carries on reviewing* That chapter was great! I was hoping around in joy when I saw 'Squall's point of view'. I always thought that he did hate her guts from the beginning of the story but.. Squall as always, is very unreadable and hates Riona's guts instead. I sooooo can't wait for the next chapter and I want a picture of Squall bending over!! >.<
Squall: What..?!
Nevermind.. *Winks*
Riona: .. Because-
Shut up! I don't want to hear your 'lame' excuses, ok?! *Carries on reviewing* That chapter was great! I was hoping around in joy when I saw 'Squall's point of view'. I always thought that he did hate her guts from the beginning of the story but.. Squall as always, is very unreadable and hates Riona's guts instead. I sooooo can't wait for the next chapter and I want a picture of Squall bending over!! >.<
Squall: What..?!
Nevermind.. *Winks*
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! squall's back! and i get ice cream! *does happy dance* i loved the chapter, and i really can't wait for the next one!!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm back. Just wanted to let you know. So, now I'll be able to raead your stories. I hope you got my last email. I wrote like 2 paragraphs. I thought these last chapters were great. I can't wait til you write the next ones. :)
- Kishana
- Kishana
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Irvine can come polish is gun with me *any time*! <333
A most excellent chapter! As always. I was a little confused about the title at first, but it became a lot clearer as I read through it!
I am annoyed that Lisa's giving up so easily! Lisa *has* to get Squall! Has to-has to-has to! I won't stand for anything else! And bloody Rinoa! She did that really mean thing that girls do: 'Oh! I heard that he doesn't like you' blah blahblah! Makes me hate 'er even more! Bloody, prissy little princess! ><
Irvine being the perfect gentleman and huggin' her. Don't we all just want one of our own?! Excellent description on the flash of the past, recieving the game an' all. Really a sweet idea! (sounds exactly like me when I first got the game.)
I look forward to the next chapter!
~~Silver
A most excellent chapter! As always. I was a little confused about the title at first, but it became a lot clearer as I read through it!
I am annoyed that Lisa's giving up so easily! Lisa *has* to get Squall! Has to-has to-has to! I won't stand for anything else! And bloody Rinoa! She did that really mean thing that girls do: 'Oh! I heard that he doesn't like you' blah blahblah! Makes me hate 'er even more! Bloody, prissy little princess! ><
Irvine being the perfect gentleman and huggin' her. Don't we all just want one of our own?! Excellent description on the flash of the past, recieving the game an' all. Really a sweet idea! (sounds exactly like me when I first got the game.)
I look forward to the next chapter!
~~Silver
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squall better come for lisa! oooo chocolate ice cream! darnit, i want some! great chapter though! okey bye!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
writer's block sucks! i hate when i get it, so i know how you feel. ooo! Sephiroth poster would be nice! hehe! great chapter and seifer does kinda remind me of nick carter. lol. seifer in a boy band. thats just too funny! cant wait for the next chapter!