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"Holy shit, faster, horsey, faster!!" - Just goes to show how funny Zell can be even when he's in one of the worst situations of all time - being shark food. The dream was weird, just as disjointed and fantastical (the horse dropping out of the sky lmao) as any real dream is. Zell had a premonition/dream about his savior, some Knight in shining armor - the gloved hand had me beyond suspicious. As soon as I read that, I almost skipped the whole chapter and went straight for the bottom to find out more about this Knight and his gloved hands - but, I resisted temptation... barely. The Zell abuse was painful - I wanted to beat those bastards into a pulp for even daring to hurt Zell. When the kitty brigade came to the rescue, that was too cute - but the kicker, SEIFER! Let's do this again: SEIFER! *happy* Zell's dream was definitely some type of metaphorical premonition, and I couldn't be anymore happier that Seifer's made his grand debut. I've been waiting for him, since Chapter 2 when Zell mentioned "Seifer was probably holed up sulking", actually. So yeah, majorly happy about Seifer addition!

Seifer. Zell. Sex. Not one of my all-time favorite pairing's, but definitely one of my favorite lemon scenes *pants*. lmao @ that image of the weiner between Zell's ass though, too funny. Not to mention, the Alpha slapping Beta action was hot - Dominant Seifer is just as addictive as Dominant Squall. The way you keep Seifer in character is delightful - "It … hurt Seifer to think of that, and he didn’t like that. It felt too much like a weakness." - excellent, that describes Seifer perfectly. That shows just how much Seifer wants to be the 'macho' man who needs no one and feels no 'warm' emotions, but in all reality - he cares much more than he lets on. There's so much information placed in this chapter, it's mind-blowing (oh, bad naughty thoughts). I figured those bastards from the last chapter were bandits of some sort, but The Host is a group of cats that Seifer can actually communicate with? Can only Seifer communicate with them or will Squall and the other's be able to later? Since Seifer's going to be heading to Esthar (assuming he's going to the Theocracy) does that mean Squall and Seifer will finally be reunited (assuming that Squall is going along with Rinoa to that quack Odine)? Ack, sorry to be pelting you with question's - can't wait to find out what's gonna happen in next chapter!

Side note: Crying Zell is even more addictive than a crying Irvine, a crying Zell reminds me of a weeping-almost-legal-Catholic school boy; where as a crying Irvine reminds me of a sobbing-I've-fallen-save-me-hero College drama student. Basically, innocenct against the more... seasoned - both are highly appealing (stimulatingly so) to my psyche *nod*.

And ones again Seifer will be the hero of the story.
That is just wrong.
I can not stand arrogant, selfish bastards who can do anything they like and still come on top.
And now Zell will be Seifers bitch.
Even worse.
Please let at least Irvine belong to Squall.
Seifer can keep Quistis though.
I hope that Squall woud top Seifer, and I dont mean that sexsuali. (althoug, sex woud be bonus)
Sadly, for me this story is goin in to bad direction.
Please write more.
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::Beautiful golden babies.::

woot! woot!
i must say, i'm enjoying the hell out of this...

Seifer/Zell sex is always good, though you had me confused for a moment. I thought Zell was actually gonna top Seifer @_@. That would've been very wrong. But now I'm even more confuzzled. How did Seifer get involved with the Lanians, who is the king, and why the hell are things getting even more complicated this far into a story? Oye.

CP the sugar fiend

Oooooh! Now we'r starting to see a bit more of what's going on! I kinda figured the cats had more to do with it than just being present. I now wonder who this King is, and the theocracy, and the pirates.
It also looks like family groups need two males and a female which means Squall, Irvine and Selphie are one fully formed group (with a child already on the way) - and they seem generally colour-matched too, all of them dark-haired. And now the Host want to build a second family of blonds.

Wow, this is probably the most coherent, sensible and wordy review I've given to this fic so far. My apologies for the previous ones (and any short pointless future ones too) but I'm not great at reviews so they tend to be a simple "great story!" if I like the fic enough. Anyhow, I'll be checking in again for more!

You must be on crack or something. This story just keeps getting better and better!

It's been awhile since I've reviewed, I'm sorry. Things have been stuffy! I really like where this is going, it's getting really interesting. Amazing, Hun. No dissapointment at all. Keep it coming!

No, not Seifer! Please NO Seifer!!
Why does that asshole come to every story, and usually ruin it.
Please dont let Seifer anywhere near Squall, Zell or Irvine.
Rhinoa woud be perfect. Nobody really cares about Rhinoa, so Seifer and Rhinoa coud just leave together. Please.
However if Seifer does come to the kitty pack, DONT make him equal to Squall. Squall is the alfa. Seifer failed SeeD test so many times its embarrassing and he was so powerhungry that he fell to Sorseresses magic. If you have to make him have sex with the guys, make him BOTTOM.
Please write more.
http://www.freewebs.com/waendil

This just keeps geting better and better. more...more...MORE!!!!