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by RaceUlfson

schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm! I love Irvine as bottom boy and this was hot! What's up with the cat? Please continue, this is the best FF8 I've stumbled across in a long while!
person Lady_Saktaka
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was not a let down what so ever. Seriously, it makes me think and I enjoy fiction that makes me think. Is Squall's attraction only for Irvine? Is the fever passing onto Zell? Is Squall going to go for Zell? Will it carry on? I have no idea, but you're really making this interesting. On my third chapter I told everything to read your stuff, it's addicting. The comedy, the descriptions. You've really pinpointed their personalities. You're amazing! Keep up the fantastic job, you're doing great! -Lady Saktaka
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still love this fic, even... what... four years is it? since I first read it.

and lady_saktaka, she's my beta reader :D
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, that was amazing. I read some other stuff, bookmarked it. You're an amazing writer and I think that you can pull anything off. It's writer's like you who I really look up to and try to follow. You'd be a very good BETA reader. Maybe you'll take it into consideration, or maybe you already are one. Anyways, please update. Poor Zell! :0 Lady Saktaka
person Honey Nut Loop
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. This is brilliant. update soon.
person Zin
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm.. that was somewhat evil and very, very HOT. ^^ more?
person Ardwynna
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely what 'writhing like cats in heat' means. Very hot and although not quite as spooky as the last one, there's still an edge. It reminds me of an old ghost story about a village of cats.
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really think that you did an amazing job. You should definitely consider doing a few more, or even a sequel. Probably a following to this, if Squall and Irvine were REALLY under a sudden thrall. I don't know, just a suggestion. I hope to see some more! Best of luck.