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by RaceUlfson

schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm going to picture Seifer and Squall having dominance battles more often because it's fucking hot as hell. Interesting news about Irvine, great character interaction, write more soon before I have to bring out the fish and slap you with it.

CP the mopey
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay! Seifer wants him!!
person Iron Dog
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*happy update dance* Wheeee. Mix up and misunderstandings and seifer kisses squall. I is a happy camper. Thanks for the explanation by the way. appreciated. now I've just got to bite my nails until the next update. oh, the image of a startled seifer slipping off the roof, priceless. all graceful big tawny cat...yeah right *snicker*
person lynn
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! I'm so pleased you came back to writing this, i missed you sooo much. and did i ever say how much i loved seifer? Oh, i know i have but perhaps i haven't mentioned how much i love seiferXsquall. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
person GlitterGirl
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so *cruel* to leave it like that, with Squall about to confront Seifer! *grin* I love it! This story is fascinating, as always. I've been a reader since it began, and I love this series just as much now as I did then. The passages about Squall's need to assert dominance are especially vivid. Write more! More!
person hopemia
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, love this story!!!!!

I can barely wait for more! Update soon ,okay?
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It keeps getting better and better!


More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


person Jicky
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm gotta say i'm confused ^^''' i liked how Squall, Irvine, Zell, n Seifer got togetther~ not so happy bout Quistis, Selphie, n Rinoa being involved thou =P I'm totally confused by the aliens n the names =_= But i'd like to know wut's gona happen, n how this story's gona end.
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I don't know if you like Seifer/Squall at all, but it would be soooo hot in here. *begs*

Great story!
person Dark Hope
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take so long to put up the next few parts. I really want to get to the Seifer x Squall stuff. Also I really want Seifer to get Squall pregnant because that would be so cool. I love this story Please Please Please update soon.