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Bad Ass!!!!! you're back still enjoying every word

You make us wait so long for an update and then you end it with a note like that? ::sighs and shakes head sadly:: Actually, I'm ecstatic that you've added more to this. There are only two FFVIII multi-chaptered stories on this site that I look forward to updates eagerly, and this is my favorite of the two. This is well-written, funny, and a just-plain good read.

At first I thought that perhaps Laguna was resistant to the Fever, as was mentioned earlier that some people are, but I guess he's as suseptable (it's very early, I can't spell worth crap at this time of day) as our favorite SEEDs. Also, now I've got my brother looking at me weird when I laughed out loud at that line of Laguna's when he mentioned peeing on bushes.

Also, there is something I'm curious about; it seems that all the ones who contracted the Fever are all, well, I suppose 'submissive', but with different ranks. Like Squall is dominant to Zell, but submissive to the native-born Lanian, the Man who was a dominant. Is there ever someone who got the Fever who became dominant, or a Man or Woman, or whatever?

An interesting throught; wouldn't it be interesting of Seifer was one of those dominant ones? Of course, you've mentioned Seifer getting preggers, so I doubt he's a Man, but it's something for me to ponder and grin about. >;D

And my mostest favouritest beta updates! Wheeee. It was very nice to see this first thing in the morning. I like that things are finally coming to a head with everything. It cute that Laguna sees himself as "the older lion" and I loved the line about him realizing that peeing on the bushes to mark territority wouldn't have been appropriate at that time. Squall not need Seifer? Pftph. How can resist? More please.

Whoo! New chapter! It's been a while since you last updated!

A lot of info needed to be passed here. Also, Rinoa has a tail? XD

I'll definately be waiting for the next chapter, it'll probably be explosive!

Whoohoo update! I've been watching for this cos I luv the story. I can't wait to see how all the dominance works out and what the final groupings will be. I get the impression threesomes are the norm for Lanians (snicker).
Just a thought from when I was re-reading earlier chapters - both Ambassador Rahlk and Seifer thought Laguna was pretty. Future problems for the President of Esthar?

I wanna see a Seifer/Squall catfight. About damn time you got this up, though. *Slaps with fish* Update, now. Next chapter better have violence, sex, or both to make up for keeping us all waiting impatiently.

CP the moody

First and foremost: thank you for making my evening. I've just found this fic, and so far it's been a great read. You (both) do a great job of balancing an actual plotline with lighter moments that had me giggling. ("Screwaga" made me stop reading for a moment, I was laughing so hard.) Your characterizations are fun and distinctive, and even certain characters that don't appeal to me especially in most fics (ex: Laguna) come off as silly and protective and just generally awesome. And as for the sex... Well. Um. About all I can say there is: pride-y polysexual kittysmut whee! Can't wait to see Squallycat and Seifycat striking sparks off each other. Mmm, alpha-sex.

In other words, loveditloveditlovedit - Thanks again!

OMG........ Can anyone say obsessed... I LOVES FEVER!!!!!

Fever is written in excellent style, and it flows, mostly, but the few hiccups add to the pace, I think....

Peggy Lee's Fever is one of my fav songs, so that just makes this so much better....

Update soon... I needs updates.....

*cries* PLEASE??????????????????????

I love the story. I loved it the first time I came accross it as just Father's House and it's even better in it's entirety here. Can't wait until more comes. With all the sex that's going on I hope you are going to have some Seifer x Squall action going. They are by far my favorite couple and Seifer is the only one I can see Squall truly submitting to. Will watch for more of this beauty keep uo the excellent work.

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Noooooooooooooooo! A cliffhanger!
Please update soon!