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Is it just me, or does this alien culture believe in female supremacy or something? Probably just me, I tend to read too much into things once in a while. Love your Kiros, though I can't believe he did that to Ward. And the rant Laguna went on had me cracking up and smiling. It's a little OOC for him, but I could care less becauseof the sheer amusement factor.

You've cleared up a lot of my confusion, but this fic is still ungodly complicated in places. Oh well, I like it and I wanna read more.

CP the pierced (got my right tragus done Saturday. The tragus is the little flap of cartilage in front of the ear)

Yeah! you're back, i was worried about the longer updates, not that i'm complaining, cause the chapter was AWESOME!! stupid ambassadors, I LOVED Laguna showing his more commanding side, reminds you that he manages to run a country despite being a little clumsy. I can't wait till the next update! (maybe some seifer in the next!?!?!)

Oh yes....Shit kicking Laguna. I agree, he is a bad ass mo fo when he wants to be and you captured that perfectly. I esspecially love the whole exchange between him and that alien lord dude. Laguna is a bad ass. O.O Well, done.

And the group grows. I love the way you've portrayed Laguna. That happy-go-lucky attitude mixed with stone cold killer. Wonderful. Just a quick question. When the alien dude said Squall was an orphan and had no family, why didn't Laguna pipe up with "I am his father" or something equally as dramatic? Just wondering. Now I'm also curious as to this lost bloodline and if the Host is that individual(s). Little confused though when the alien dude said both Squall and Irvine wern't claimed. I thought Squall did claim Irvine way back near the beginning. Or was the alien dude talking about claiming in some other way? Okay, enough with the questions. Good chapter and anxious for the next.

Nice chapter.

But you have to be kidding "Laguna was older, taller, and just more… male"
More male? Laguna? [laughs uncontrollably]

One thing that annoyd me earlier was that Zell submitted to Seifer automaticly. Whit Squall Zell fought for dominance, but with Seifer he did not. I truly hope that it was becouse he was drugged and that Zell woud normally fight against Seifer.

Is Zell still under the influence of the drug?

Please dont let Zell be pregnent for Seifer. Zell had sex with Squall before Seifer. Zell coud be pregnent for Squall. That woud nicely put Zell back to Squall.

For Gods sake dont make Seifer Alfa over Squall.

Please write more.

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Hee! I wonder how Laguna will fit in now? I find Squall's posessive streak over him rather amusing. There something there about Squall's reaction to taller people - it makes me wonder how he will react when he and Seifer do meet up.

Hmmm :)

lol. This is utterly briilliant. The end of that chapter was amazing, hilarious in fact.

This story is odd, sexy, quarky, and generally fucked up in all the right ways. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....ok better now....just so you know I really liked how you handled Laguna at the end that was cool all around.

I love updates, I love updates. So, Laguna is gonna be in this happy little family now? Cool. Could be a set up for some more dominant male conflict. That'll keep it interesting. Little confused with who these Ambassadors really are but that just makes me want to read more. I hope you got some kind of interagation scene going on in the next chapter or so to explain a little more.

Aliens? Okay then...and I'm trying not to double over in laughter at the thought of Loirecat....it's just a little odd and amusing. *Ignores the pervy voices chanting for incestous Squall/Laguna action* Well written, I needed the humor after what the drunken muses told me to write last night.

CP the evil