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by RaceUlfson

person waendil
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Het sex! disgusting!
Please dont let Zell stay Seifers bitch, its demeaning.
For some reason its not demeaning when Squalls the topp. Dont ask me to explain it, it just is.

Aloud, he said, “I’m surprised my hair hasn’t gone snow white."
I dont get it.

The reason I review so often is becouse you email me.
Please write more.
person kieshar
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_<
person kieshar
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_< love love love.
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum, smut. I'm kinda still on an endorphin high from getting a tattoo, so I can't say much else. This plot is still confuzzling me, though, so I hope it gets a little clearer at some point.

CP the inked
person Iron Dog
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Threesome. Coolsome. I think I'm glutting myself on these today (this was the third one, sense a pattern?). I'm now anxiously waiting for the next fix. Be kind to the junkies waiting on you to deliver the goods.
person lynn
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooohhh, i liked it. Usually i am not a fan of any female character inching in on time with the boys, but now you got me all interested in the plot and i don't even mind het sex..I just want to know what will happen! i don't mind if this story has a dozen or two dozen or whatever more chapters, just keep it coming!
person Koji Nokemono
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaah I'm confused lmao XD Please finish it so I know wtf is going on lol

You're a very good writer ^ ^ I don't usually read anything with much of a plot *usually it's a one shot or a PWP even if it's in chapter* and I certainly don't read much about Zell heheh XD or the others.... Sq/Se is SO so so....abundant ..... we need more Irvine XP

I still wanna know how in the world they get pregnate.... AND I'd like to see more Squally and Irvy heheh :3 Squalliness XD heheh so kawaii ....


Well... I'm waiting *sits down with a sleeping bag*

.... Still waiting







STILL WAITING XD heheheh :3
person Iron Dog
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh. Seifer/Squall action? Yes? Please? If I beg? There would be one rip-snortin' fight for dominance if that were the case considering how they are both currently alpha males. You've got me totally beat on the update thing and I love ya for it. Short but cool foreshadowing. I'm waiting patiently (mostly) for more.
person KIN
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can own people *gets out a leash* ..... *gets out handcuffs too* heheh

you know at last years con *Animazement 2004 in Durham NC, same place I'm going this time* they were auctioning the Shirtless Bishie..... someone won a bid at $70 =D heheh

aww retractable claws... I have em... but they're not retractable heheh

"I was ravenously hungry, but I was already so tired I wasn’t sure I could stay awake long enough to eat anything." we talked about that at school the other day XD how ppl'd come home, really tired but they're feel so hungry they'd keep eating, yawn, eat..... so tired... eat XD lol

Sounds like we're bishonen shopping.... He's mine and he's mine and him and oh yeah him too

First paragraph of ch 4 ... heheh sounds like me XD I'm so contradictory... I can never take sides unless in preference


Galbadian soldiers lmao and Seifer's in the crowd XD ah someone would be missing a few limbs! *this is a diff chapter btw*

"Mmmmm… wait, no impure thoughts! Nooooo! "

You sound like my ex lol XD Mmmm yes hehehe

Heheh it's just Irvine..... he could stand there and be a magnet =D but we love him *hug*

"Okay, can we all say “personal whacking fantasy”? I knew you could! " Ok tell me when to stop saying it XD

WEll sure Irvine's a whore and all but it's cute to see him submissive ^ ^ Even though I really don't like Zell x.x You draw him in a pretty decent light :3 at least one I can stand heheheh what you say goes =D XD

lmao hardest XD psh not much of a joke but damn lmao XD

Zell's worried about Selphie killing him? Well damn, if she gets him first what would Squall have left? Not much XD

Next chapter.....

Pregnate? well ...... um....... never thought of him beig pregnate... nonetheless if it's my OC *who's already so much like a mother* he's an angel so for whatever reason this is possible?

Dammit now we need an explanation of how exactly this is possible XD lmao I'm too much fun...


Okay this is kinda long, I'll start another review heheh


person KIN
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o; well that was a rush of .... 9 months for a human, how many for a cat?

this is a little weird.... I dun usually read fics with men like this lmao oh well I'll get over it...


I still don't understand how he switched genders...... is he really a hermaphrodite we didn't know about?


WAHHHh four XD wow this is confusing lmao I think I'm having fun though lmao

fainted again XD at least he's honest XD

cheater lmao XD it's okay I do it too XD throw in something completely whack and then have em wake up hehehehe

awww this would so work for me... my husband is pregnate and I'm the father ^ ^ lmao it would so work for me XD and dammit I'd be the best father he'd ever know XD

a baby baby..... er .... there's one way to put it XD

And now I'm RPing as Muraki... yaaaaaaay but I will finish reading it asap :3 =D heheheh *handcuffs you to me* so you can't run away << >>