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“You and Selphie were sick. I was good to go. He needed me. Don’t be so jealous.”


ohhhh he's going down ... that was suicide ... so to speak XD

Squall... like Alan Rickman as Snape.... sneaky and quiet in anger... so much scarier mwahahaha

cat fight! whoo er I guess?

then again Martial Arts aren't used for fighting any fight anyway :/ if it was artist against artist maybe but it'd hurt Zell just as much... also, just pressure point him XP you know, lower his blood pressure or sumin.... knock him out a while... hehe XD

“C’mon, you gonna give me the Papercuts of Death, Leonhart? Don’t you know how to hit?” He held up his fists. “Stop with the sissy scratching, it’s so freakin’ girly.”

I happen to like his girliness... hmmm is THAT what gets him such a cute ass ? XD heheh *My Friend Cody wonders what women do to have such nice asses... I told him it was child bearing XD We have to make up for sumin here*

aw that was an abrupt ending. This is a fantastic chapter to go with a fantastic story. I'm fascinated as to what is going on.

awww at least Squall's honest XD

Damn we gotta hurt Irvine so Squall can take the bait.... like... everytime lol XD oh well Lemme read the rest now =D

and bc my other review wasn't in a new window


heheheh I love your writing XD

dammit I get to here : Squall almost purred, those sounds drove him as much as the taste, like lightly salted peaches, of Irvine’s skin. He wanted more from him.

before I completely lose focus lol You're just that good :3


awwww ... cats heheheh you want animal insticts do Fruits Basket....


Ima be Irvine for the con I'm doing to in two weeks time :3 heheheh XD

“Selphie. Wait. He’s gonna either recognize us or fall over. Just wait it out.”


hmmmm options XD

awwwwww ........ it's like.. beastiality ..... like really OOC beastiality XD

Yes I love his leather pants too... Squall has such a nice ass :3 ^ ^=

resist sleep... he either has a sleep guard equipped or he's an insomniac XD

"Ummm ummm ummmmmmmm" sounds like me XD heheh I was Selphie for a con about 4 years ago heheh :3


Zell! NO YOU CAN'T DO IT!!!! YOU CAN'T I SAY YOU CAN'T! NOOOOO .... I'm okay << >>

Screwaga lmao like majorly XD ah where was it earlier in the game? Like when they were locked in the room before asassinating Edea XD


Yes Zell it stays in ur pants x.x

I never liked him much but what can I do ?

Nice chapter.
I might actually like where this story is going, even with Seifer, providing that this storie is not "selfexplaining Porn".
Please dont let Seifer becom SeeD. He failed the SeeD test 3 times, and he can not take orders, and he is too selfabsorded to be leader.
Poor Zell, is he Seifers bitch, and will he be mocked by Seifer for rest of his life. Zell deserves better than Seifer. Seifer does not deserve Zell or Orphanet gangs friendship. I hope he goes away after he has done his job with Green Fewer.
Please write more.

Yea!! Frequent updates. I don't mind the lack of yaoi action as long as you keep feeding us pieces of "What the hell is going on?" (although yaoi is always good too). Now I'm really getting anxious to see what happens when Seifer and Squall do finally meet. And what the hell was that line about where Seifer said "I'm not pregnant anymore." Did I skip a chapter? Miss a post? Completely loose my memory? I'm sure I would ahve remembered reading that. There are so few Seifer mpregs out there. Anyway, great story going here and I hope you keep up with this frequent update idea.

more, more, more....please. I looove seifer, oh, i luv him. Just keeep it coming.

'Kay, I'm offically addicted to this fic. I love that Seifer has entered the fray. I really want to see some kind of dust-up between Alpha Squall an Alpha Seifer over Zell (who they've both claimed, more or less). And what about Zell? Does he get any choice in this? He has a thing going for Squall and some kind of previous relationship/thing for Seifer. Are you gonna be so cruel as to make the poor boy choose? If you do, great angst potential. I do hope you tell us just what the hell is going on with all these SeeD's turning into...whatever they are becoming. I love that you updated. keep it coming.

Hmm, starting to get some more info now.