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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really, really fucking good. You are an astoundingly, frighteningly talented writer. What happened in this fic and how the boys behaved was at times utterly terrifying and achingly gorgeous and I LOVED it all. So very much. Your descriptive skills are bloody fantastic and Bob was great; immensely enjoyed his POV. Poor bastard! I think your characterisations of the 3 boys were spot-on. Kadaj was simply perfect.
You should write books for a living. You'd make a killing out of it! ;)
You should write books for a living. You'd make a killing out of it! ;)
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mad props.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That...was beautiful. That was perfect. Every other story I've read on here has had some mistakes, but this one, aside from a few spelling and grammar errors that did not detract from the story, was flawless. And the ending made me want to cry. Good job on this. I even liked the original characters. ^_^ They were corrupt enough to be believable.
The way you portrayed the three brothers was very realistic, and there was so much emotion that each one expressed in his own, unique way. You captured the frightening aura that surrounds them, and I was actually trembling! The description of how they were all different parts of Sephiroth made a lot of sense. But the ending really killed me. It was too glorious to be believed. In the end, they were no one but themselves. Wow....
The way you portrayed the three brothers was very realistic, and there was so much emotion that each one expressed in his own, unique way. You captured the frightening aura that surrounds them, and I was actually trembling! The description of how they were all different parts of Sephiroth made a lot of sense. But the ending really killed me. It was too glorious to be believed. In the end, they were no one but themselves. Wow....
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're writing style is wonderful. So full of description and imagery. Wonderful job.
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was just wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad story really, but very beautifully written.
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great story!
I really liked it, and I loved the names of the thugs in the bar.
The characterisation is a bit off, but completely understandable if you've never seen the movie. But I still like the way you wrote the brothers.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
I really liked it, and I loved the names of the thugs in the bar.
The characterisation is a bit off, but completely understandable if you've never seen the movie. But I still like the way you wrote the brothers.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yadaa! That was so good, i luved it!
i expecially liked the wording in it ^_^!
pls write more!
i expecially liked the wording in it ^_^!
pls write more!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe you named someone bob hehe
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this story for the 3rd time, after seeing Advent Children...And I still love it just as much as I did the first time. The characters are in my opinion, very in character, and the story is very well written. That said, consider yourself scolded...For not updating since APRIL!! I Know that there has to be more to this story than just one long chapter!