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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, good characterization of Yuna and Seymour.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my favourite Seymour-fanfic. It was a dream come true when I went to search for ffX-lemons. It is well written, somehow blood-red, and despite being short it is not hollow. It describes well the one short softly violent moment. Seymour and Yuna are pleasantly in-character.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely wonderful! You wrote the characters well, and your descriptions were just lovely. I'd love to see more! ^_^
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Verra good! Love the description of her environment, and the entire ordeal for Yuna. Finally someone not afraid to make the best use of the English language, not simply plow through with a general idea conveyed only with the tiny words any 10-year-old knows. I would love to see more (perhaps more chapters dedicated to this thread of storyline?). -BD
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moogle poop is better than this story,beenig kick in the face by chocobo is better . your sex seens are kinky and wild but story wise its worst than Ifirit burnning me to a cinder. it was a 2 out of 5.