rate_review Reviews

I really love this story. The setup is awesome, your descriptions give me the feeling of actually being there, the sex is freaking hawt, just enough of a tug on my heartstrings, and the end scene feels like the end of the world. I was actually shivering when Xu showed up. Such a cataclysmic, tragic battle about to happen...*shiver*

And the last line...perfect.

oh yeah! too bad there aren't any more in this line, but I love it to pieces! Of course I say that about nearly all of your stuff! definitely to be added to my recommneded's!

Seems like all you ever hear from me is that I love you and want more. I'm a greedy, demanding bitch ain't I? Truthfully, I liked this piece. I like the combo of Irvine/Seifer/Squall (Bishie overload!!!) and I really hope you find the time somewhere to continue with this arc. I think it's a nice change to have Seifer catching (see my Push It fic) and hope you continue along that vein so more.

Mmm, I have to say this may be my favorite fic of yours and lord knows you've written a hell of a lot. Everything has fallen into place in this story in a marvelous way. The sex is hot and beautiful at the same time. The story and set-up is just wonderful -- very original and mysterious. I'm so eager to read more that it's a little painful to hear you may not make this a longer story. Regardless, congratulations on a great chapter. I really, really enjoyed it :)

Seifer: First of all, the only person who I'd even think of allowing to fuck me would be Squall. And even then it would take some persuasion.

Aside from that comment from my muse, I enjoyed this fic. Great sex, pretty good semblence of plot. The end seemed a little rushed, though. And you better get around to more of Hurt. I wanna read it about as much as you wanna read the next chapter of Redemption.

CP the bleh

Wow this is sooo well written. Fantastic. I know you said you probably wouldn't make this into a multi chapter but that doesn't mean i can't beg. PPPPLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!