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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! I hope there is more to come. The way you portray Seifer and Squall is brilliant, most times authors make them being in love too cheesy, but this is perfect. Keep writing more please!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, the last one Seifer is evil lol, really evil.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow hot scene!!! haha can't believe i said that!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Too lazy to log in..) I LOVED this! Very hot.
In some of the earlier chapters, I think there needed to be more commas, but it's like that's a big deal, anyway. I liked how you switched to 1st person pov for this latest (4?) chapter. Seifer is such a perv. ^_^
Definitely one of the best Seifer/Squall fics I've read! Great job, and can't wait until you update. ^_^
In some of the earlier chapters, I think there needed to be more commas, but it's like that's a big deal, anyway. I liked how you switched to 1st person pov for this latest (4?) chapter. Seifer is such a perv. ^_^
Definitely one of the best Seifer/Squall fics I've read! Great job, and can't wait until you update. ^_^
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont' know what to say but AWWW. hehe
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two sex scenes, both of them absolutely great. And I can easily picture Selphie as being some pervy yaoi voyeur, wanting to watch Seifer fuck Squall. It's good they came out about things, though I didn't like you skipping an entire year. Kinda wanted to know more about what happened in the meantime.
CP the perv
CP the perv
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really love your fics! Seifer finally told Squall too! Um was that the last chapter? Hope not, but if so, it was a nice ending. =)
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawd I love you. You just have a way of writing these two that is perfect. Race is one lucky chicky tohave gotten this for her birthday. Please tell me that there is going to be more in this arc than just two lonely chapters.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm, Seifer and I both enjoyed that present. I love how they are finally finding each other after so long but there are still some bumps in the road. Love is never easy, lol.
And you know you write lovely smut.
And you know you write lovely smut.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you are posting this. I loved it to bits. I think Squall would miss his rival terribly, who else is his equal?