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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeee!!!!!! *twitches with anticipation* lovely imagery and characterization as always!! love the drunk squall. still looking forward to the smutness!! *rolls on back to (try to) look as adorable as a ferret wanting out of its cage BAD* i'd say more if my brain were functioning well enough at the moment....o_O
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter, but the beginning was fun to read and I can't wait until you actually get to the smut because I'm sure it'll be damn good.
CP the evil
CP the evil
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rare pairing, but those are always good to see now and then. Amusing fic. And I really like your Squall.
CP the bored
CP the bored
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. Many appreciated laughs in the third chapter.
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very rare pairing.. I think I've only read one of these before...
I think Kiros/Squall would work well... I mean, Kiros is the only other male that ihas the ability to be as dominate as Seifer in FF8.
I hope to see more.
I think Kiros/Squall would work well... I mean, Kiros is the only other male that ihas the ability to be as dominate as Seifer in FF8.
I hope to see more.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There was nothing wrong with this, as such. The writing seemed a little by-the-numbers, a little bland, but inoffensive. The work of a capable teenager.
Then I got to this:
“I’m kiros btw.”
At that point I had to stop. Kiros is a sophisticated and intelligent man, a high ranking government employee and he's talking like a 12 year old sending text messages? It actually made me cringe.
Then I got to this:
“I’m kiros btw.”
At that point I had to stop. Kiros is a sophisticated and intelligent man, a high ranking government employee and he's talking like a 12 year old sending text messages? It actually made me cringe.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.... i really, really hope you continue this! this is a rather interesting pairing and i'd LOVE to read the lemon for this! Your fics are among my favs, btw!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting pairing, I hope to see more.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning and I love this pairing.
Its a bit hard to believe that all Squalsl friends are bi or gay.
Please write more.
http://www.freewebs.com/waendil
Its a bit hard to believe that all Squalsl friends are bi or gay.
Please write more.
http://www.freewebs.com/waendil