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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is great and I would love something with Yuffie and feet
The Sexy Slave Tia
The Sexy Slave Tia
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Something between Freya and Beatrix would be great, along with anything other then feet. I don't like feet.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, not terribly well written.
Try to avoid using crude words too often, cause that often ruins the story.
Also work a bit on describing feelings too, instead of only what the characters are doing.
Try to avoid using crude words too often, cause that often ruins the story.
Also work a bit on describing feelings too, instead of only what the characters are doing.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great oh I love the thought of Rikku and Yuffie they are so fucking hawt
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad chapter, there's quite a few more spelling and grammar errors here than your others though. Seems a tad sloppy, but still, the writeing itself was good.
As for suggestions, I'd really like to see Rydia and Aeris together.
As for suggestions, I'd really like to see Rydia and Aeris together.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz have 1 of the mystic quest girls pheobe or kaeli plz, they get no love!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the idea of Scarlet giving a lapdance to someone.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was good I want Yuffie Rikku in the next chapter plz you can have a flesh earing panda oh and what do you think of my new pename
Wiyh love,Imasuky Lomae
Wiyh love,Imasuky Lomae
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write a chapter with Ruby(FFIX) or Scarlet(FFVII). Or just a lesbian orgy with all the girls/womans that don't appeared yet.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see Scarlet giving a lapdance to someone, maybe Aki?