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by DarkFae

person vivilover69
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...^^

vvl 69
person DarkFae
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it'd be weird if i reviewed my own story, huh? lol, no no, i'm just thanking those who reviewed, and who will ^_^ i promise there is more to come, though i might change my focus to reno or aerith... or mebbe sephy, i haven't decided. thank you so much! i might not be able to be online for a bit, but i will visit and post whenever i can! ^.^

tankies!
nev
person Ri
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowy...I loved it! Heh it was sexy hot. Yes I am weird. XD Nice job.
person DarkFae
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
back again, not reviewing my own work, just responding ^_^

as for cloud being insanely submissive, he was sort of a bitch in his mind when tifa fished him out, at least i thought so. but your right, i'm sure vincent could have been kinder. think about it from cloud's point of view though... how many words do they really exchange? and yes i admit that to have sex it should be a bit intimate (from the way i wrote it anyway), but cloud was so confused and i'm sure he would be ashamed later of it... after the costa de sol encounter though ^_^ and of course, though vincent may be desporately attracted to cloud, he's gotta composure to keep ^_^

and who cares anyway, their fanfics, and i've read much poorly written stuff out there neway... btw, your stuff rocks!!

tx!
nev